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[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Too Soon To End
[time] => 2004-08-10 00:07:33
[hometext] => This is about my sister.. i just dont know what to do anymore... please comment.. i need feedback
[bodytext] => Have you any self respect or inner pride? How long will you let this carry on? it's praticly suicide You know what your doing, and you know the danger I can't even help you right now, i'm filled with too much anger What you are doing is ruining all the respect i had left for you Don't yell at me, it's not my fault, what do you expect me to do? I love you, your my sister, but right now your puting this family to shame You've infected your body, you know he tested postive, there is nobody but yourself to blame I won't cry for you, i can't, it hurts more than it should I tried to tell you,i did everything i possibly could What more can i do? I gave everything i had, i reached out to you Yet you refused to listen, you just pushed me aside That's fine i never forced you to listen, but just so you know, there is nowhere to hide It hurts me so much, i hate you for this, i will never forgive you I hate myself more, because i don't hate you at all, i just don't know what to do Please if you never listened to me before Listen to me now,that's what sisters are for Just please get help, i'm your baby sister, don't you want what's best for me? If you do, go to the nearest clinic immediately I'm on my knees begging you, if you don't want to do it for yourself, do it for me You say you hate me feeling sad and alone, well you doing this will end that pain temporarily Your my sister, your my world, more importantly, your my friend I am still young and so are you, it's not time for the end [comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 48 [informant] => TheBlackVoid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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