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True Love
Contributed by
Hakiokusaken
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Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:44:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hugs with kisses that are true
My life is lived just for you
A rose for you when we meet
Together I feel so complete
A special plan for me that day
To see my lover where she stays
I unlock the door to get by
Only to see her legs held high
I felt a fusion of torrent tears
Rapturous moans torment my ears
I went to my car to grab my knife
To meet this man who stole my wife
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Hakiokusaken
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2004-08-10 14:44:57]
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Re: True Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on
Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 02:18:11 AM AEST
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| great write, hope it didn't happen that way, but if it did i would have been right there with u |
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Re: True Love
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by corrupted_minds on
Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 06:08:04 AM AEST
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soo soo much emotion, so powerful. The ending had me. Good work
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