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Dreaming
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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These are my thoughts of you with me,
The tender things my mind did see,
My fingers softly on your cheek,
You in my arms, my knees gone weak,
Walking slowly in the park,
Talking softly in the dark,
Holding hands out in the rain,
Healing things that cause you pain,
Brushing hair from off your face,
And kissing you after a chase,
Dancing slowly in your arms,
Seduced by you and your sweet charms,
Watching as you sleep near me,
Id love you for eternity,
All these things I dreamed bout you,
One day I hope youll dream me too.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: Dreaming
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by OreO on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 10:24:05 AM AEST
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This is going to make
me cry lol, Great write
Keep em' coming
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Re: Dreaming
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by Huey on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 12:24:10 PM AEST
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| Vivid...simple but so easy to imagine...its great |
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Re: Dreaming
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 31st October 2002 @ 10:44:12 PM AEST
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| This is gorgeous....=:) |
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Re: Dreaming
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 04:07:02 PM AEST
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| So tender ... so sweet. This is lovely. |
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Re: Dreaming
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by tiger_babyj on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 09:13:55 PM AEST
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| THIS HITS SO CLOSE TO HOME IT IS UNREAL.YOU HAVE SAID ALOT OF WHAT I FEEL.THIS IS GREAT.REALLY GOOD |
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Re: Dreaming
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 07:17:03 AM AEST
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| Wow, it is truely great. One of the best that I have ever seem. It really touched my heart. |
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Re: Dreaming
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 03:18:06 AM AEST
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| Maybe she is...you never know. Some people are scared to tell what their dreams really are. |
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Re: Dreaming
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by Rachel on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 08:15:00 AM AEST
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| That is so cool to write and sooo sweet. I love it. |
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Re: Dreaming
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 12:48:47 AM AEST
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I decided to read this poem not knowing who wrote it...and it's you wordpoet ! I already commented on another that I loved and here is another !Thanks for the beautiful write,it was much appreciated
PumpkinPie |
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