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Array ( [sid] => 59694 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Theory - Earth and Hell [time] => 2004-08-11 00:34:29 [hometext] => this is how i see the relationship between earth and hell... you dont have to agree but this is how i feel [bodytext] => Hell is discribed as a unpleasant place,
Somewhere the unforgiven sinner must face,
Much hotter than any fireplace,
Which the fire must be embraced.

I thought about how earth and hell are related,
In my mind it was not that complicated,
In theory they are one in the same,
It's like if one was copied and then renamed,

Hell is full of hatred and sin,
Earth is the same just alot cooler within.
Difference is hell is forever,
Earth you can die if you're a sinner.

This place is full of corruption,
It's sad to for us to kill just to function,
Started wrong from the start,
Now there is evil in everyone's hearts. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 43 [informant] => AdamChantell [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Theory - Earth and Hell

Contributed by AdamChantell on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 12:34:29 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Hell is discribed as a unpleasant place,
Somewhere the unforgiven sinner must face,
Much hotter than any fireplace,
Which the fire must be embraced.

I thought about how earth and hell are related,
In my mind it was not that complicated,
In theory they are one in the same,
It's like if one was copied and then renamed,

Hell is full of hatred and sin,
Earth is the same just alot cooler within.
Difference is hell is forever,
Earth you can die if you're a sinner.

This place is full of corruption,
It's sad to for us to kill just to function,
Started wrong from the start,
Now there is evil in everyone's hearts.




Copyright © AdamChantell ... [ 2004-08-11 00:34:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Theory - Earth and Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by KiLin on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 09:49:26 PM AEST
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Iteresting theory, thank you for sharing.


Re: Theory - Earth and Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by brown_eyez_ on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 03:00:23 PM AEST
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i totally agree.....earth is hell......tear tear....




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