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Array ( [sid] => 59708 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Starting To Cut [time] => 2004-08-11 02:18:04 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Im slipping more everyday
A cut here, a burn there
Im starting not to care
My body needs thats touch so much
Im again starting to cut

Its been about a month since I last did
Then all the bad things happen all at once
Things I can take

The things my parents say
What my brother does everyday
All the pain thats sent my way
From what I think of myself
My familys hate, My friends hurting,
With no one to care

I held all this inside
But when she showed me what she did,
I cried, Trying to hold back the tears

Ive broken her promise, and why stop there
But I dont want her to care
I dont want her to hurt, or do the same
If she hurts, Im the one to blame

So dont do the same, Im not worth it
If you do the same, I'll do more, worse
Please dont, I Love You, I dont want you to hurt

Other than that, Im giving up
Im again starting to cut. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 61 [informant] => willow_tara72002 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Starting To Cut

Contributed by willow_tara72002 on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 02:18:04 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Im slipping more everyday
A cut here, a burn there
Im starting not to care
My body needs thats touch so much
Im again starting to cut

Its been about a month since I last did
Then all the bad things happen all at once
Things I can take

The things my parents say
What my brother does everyday
All the pain thats sent my way
From what I think of myself
My familys hate, My friends hurting,
With no one to care

I held all this inside
But when she showed me what she did,
I cried, Trying to hold back the tears

Ive broken her promise, and why stop there
But I dont want her to care
I dont want her to hurt, or do the same
If she hurts, Im the one to blame

So dont do the same, Im not worth it
If you do the same, I'll do more, worse
Please dont, I Love You, I dont want you to hurt

Other than that, Im giving up
Im again starting to cut.

Copyright © willow_tara72002 ... [ 2004-08-11 02:18:04]
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Re: Starting To Cut (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 02:34:43 AM AEST
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Very sad, heart wrenching write even tho it speaks loud. U tell the reader that it's hell to live that way.
If your home life is so bad call someone and get help!
Find that something good inside and focus on that and find your own inner peace.
Choose life!
luv, huggs, faith, hope, peace, joy,
emy

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