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its so unfair
u cant leave us now!
do u even care?
y r u going?
its so so so cruel
remember the fun at lunch during school

Ness will miss ya
cos shes known u so long

kirsty will miss ya
coz u werent a mong

alex will miss ya
just cos she will

and jay will miss ya
cos he thinks ure brill

so dont leave us sarah
in this mess of a town
we cant stop u going
so .....

YOUR COMING BACK DOWN!!

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c ya

Contributed by aaaahhhh_potato on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 09:51:22 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

y r u leavin?
its so unfair
u cant leave us now!
do u even care?
y r u going?
its so so so cruel
remember the fun at lunch during school

Ness will miss ya
cos shes known u so long

kirsty will miss ya
coz u werent a mong

alex will miss ya
just cos she will

and jay will miss ya
cos he thinks ure brill

so dont leave us sarah
in this mess of a town
we cant stop u going
so .....

YOUR COMING BACK DOWN!!

Copyright © aaaahhhh_potato ... [ 2004-08-11 09:51:22]
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Re: c ya (User Rating: 1 )
by lovespoetic0518 on Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 11:20:04 AM AEST
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Very nice poem for whoever its for. She'll appreciate it! Take care

Kimberly :)

Re: c ya (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 12:59:07 PM AEST
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nice poem.. It is hard saying good bye to a friend. others enter in. some leave. memories stay...

Re: c ya (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 05:34:32 PM AEST
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alex will miss ya
just cos she will

Interesting line. It really does make sense. Need there be a reason to miss someone?
Take care.
David

Re: c ya (User Rating: 1 )
by Somnium on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 04:46:04 AM AEST
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Your friend is very loved, it must hurt her to leave such caring people who want her t stay so much.

Re: c ya (User Rating: 1 )
by bikersme on Wednesday, 22nd February 2012 @ 11:46:56 AM AEST
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love this, its gr8.

Re: c ya (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzylnn on Wednesday, 25th April 2012 @ 04:16:30 PM AEST
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Adorable!

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