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Ashes spread all around!

Tears falling!
Times not stalling!

My heart breaking!
No love for the taking!

Sword of steal!
These wounds won't heal!

I don't care!
I have nothing left to share!

No soul!
Your death took it's toll!

Broken heart!
When will my life restart!

Many a lie!
Not even a goodbye!

You're dead!
I'm here instead!

Shattered dreams!
Nothing lives here but devious schemes!

Cold grave!
You I couldn't save!

Cruel fate!
Lord I was to late!

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Killer Of Self

Contributed by skyblumoon on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 11:58:56 AM in AEST
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Cold ground!
Ashes spread all around!

Tears falling!
Times not stalling!

My heart breaking!
No love for the taking!

Sword of steal!
These wounds won't heal!

I don't care!
I have nothing left to share!

No soul!
Your death took it's toll!

Broken heart!
When will my life restart!

Many a lie!
Not even a goodbye!

You're dead!
I'm here instead!

Shattered dreams!
Nothing lives here but devious schemes!

Cold grave!
You I couldn't save!

Cruel fate!
Lord I was to late!

Copyright © skyblumoon ... [ 2004-08-12 11:58:56]
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Re: Killer Of Self (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 02:06:12 PM AEST
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I've lost loved ones but not to suicide so I honestly can't say I know how you feel for I don't. But the best way you can perceive the situation is by knowing that your sister is now your GARDIAN ANGEL and will be by your side through your up's and down's. I'm terribly sorry. I myself lost someone three days ago to murder. I truly hope you can find peace and don't blame yourself for what happened. May Peace and the ANGELS be with you.
ALINA

Re: Killer Of Self (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:04:29 AM AEST
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I liked this very emotional I'm glad you have found a positive way to vent your feelings. I thought it could have done without the exclamation points at the end of every line, but other than that it was very enjoyable.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Killer Of Self (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:12:29 AM AEST
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wow.....beautiful write. i myself have lost several friends to suicide, they can never be replaced but time will ease your pain you can be sure of that. send me a message if you ever need anything. i look forward to more of your writing.
lovelovelove, Brynna

Re: Killer Of Self (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:45:43 AM AEST
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very sad emotional write I've never lost any friends or family to suicide but I've attempted it myself once and it will never happen again.
sorry for your loss. good write

Brandy

Re: Killer Of Self (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:19:48 AM AEST
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I agree with those who have posted comments on your poetry already. This is a very good poem. I look forward to reading more.

Re: Killer Of Self (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:41:11 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. I am again sorry for your loss.

Spazzo

Re: Killer Of Self (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 12:41:12 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. I am again sorry for your loss.

Spazzo

Re: Killer Of Self (User Rating: 1 )
by izzy on Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 03:58:41 PM AEST
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This is so sad. You'r very strong to be ablr to write something this powerful.
Izzy

Re: Killer Of Self (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 12:57:52 AM AEST
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Blu...
Now I know what u meant with the comment on Cold Reality... Suicide... Strong write... sorry for ur loss...
~Donna~

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