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Array ( [sid] => 59871 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Dream [time] => 2004-08-12 12:14:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => With so many different feelings,
My heart was happy, now it’s peeling,
It silently bleeds inside my chest,
It’s given up & wants to lay to rest.

I feel anger rise from my toes,
Where it will stop no-one knows,
This rage is tinged with sadness too,
My red temper is mixed with deep blue.

All I can do is let out an unhappy sigh,
Inside my soul wants to cry,
I thought that I was on my way,
To fulfilling a dream I have every day.

My eyes feel watery & cold,
As the deceit begins to unfold,
Frustration creeps quietly around,
It takes a hold but with no sound.

I was just too blind to see,
A fool was being made out of me,
They really must have seen me coming,
Toward my dreams I was running.

Wishing I could turn back the clock,
Saving myself from another knock,
But I didn’t see what was in front of my face,
Excitement was travelling at too fast a pace.

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Broken Dream

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 12:14:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

With so many different feelings,
My heart was happy, now it’s peeling,
It silently bleeds inside my chest,
It’s given up & wants to lay to rest.

I feel anger rise from my toes,
Where it will stop no-one knows,
This rage is tinged with sadness too,
My red temper is mixed with deep blue.

All I can do is let out an unhappy sigh,
Inside my soul wants to cry,
I thought that I was on my way,
To fulfilling a dream I have every day.

My eyes feel watery & cold,
As the deceit begins to unfold,
Frustration creeps quietly around,
It takes a hold but with no sound.

I was just too blind to see,
A fool was being made out of me,
They really must have seen me coming,
Toward my dreams I was running.

Wishing I could turn back the clock,
Saving myself from another knock,
But I didn’t see what was in front of my face,
Excitement was travelling at too fast a pace.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-08-12 12:14:26]
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Re: Broken Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 01:09:29 PM AEST
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really liked the line -

'I feel anger rise from my toes,
Where it will stop no-one knows,'

enjoyed reading this piece it took me on an exciting, sad melloncollie journey.

Re: Broken Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 04:26:41 PM AEST
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Awwww..... I hope you feel better soon! I too, wish to turn back the clock, but then again, where in time would I take it? This is a gut wrenching write! Feel better soon!!!
(((((krissee)))))
Angel always...joni

Re: Broken Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 08:39:04 PM AEST
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I can relly see the anger in this, I know that this will pass & you'll move on! Good luck Christina

Re: Broken Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 09:23:13 AM AEST
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i love your use of colors in this poem with the "red temper is mixed with deep blue" line, absolutely beautiful! great write!
Brynna

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