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The Dance
Contributed by
Hugh
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Thursday, 12th August 2004 @ 06:32:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The Dance
This ache inside Eats me alive This pain just wont subside This fear of mine Controls my life and haunts my soul This fear of you This fear of me And of what We could be What are we? What do you want? And is it me? So many questions Trapped within my soul I cant think straight I've lost control Control of my life Control of my heart I lost control Right from the start I just want to be with you But also want to pull away And save my heart Come what may Life is a gift Love is a chance You can stand and watch Or join the dance
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Hugh
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2004-08-12 18:32:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tanmaya on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:51:27 AM AEST (User
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Nicely written!
It takes courage to truly live, to be open enough and love someone, to put down your guard.
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Re: The Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by inoc on
Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:00:54 AM AEST (User
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yeh not bad...
4 out of 5!
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