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Array ( [sid] => 59959 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the girl i love [time] => 2004-08-13 00:24:08 [hometext] => about this girl i love, but i just can't tell her [bodytext] => the girl i like is almost insane,
but the sound of this is music,
the way she does things blows my brain,
to others may seem useless

am i a fool to think this way,
will she ever see,
for now i will wait the day,
that our love will be

i want to tell her but can i, how?
it makes me feel twisted inside,
how much more will my feelings allow,
to sit and wait by the side

i’ve got to show her just how i feel,
in the perfect kind of way,
and even if she can not deal,
it is the thing i have to say

I love you ____ with all my heart,
you fill me up with joy,
and although our love may never depart,
this moment we can enjoy. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 2 [informant] => justjames [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

the girl i love

Contributed by justjames on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:24:08 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

the girl i like is almost insane,
but the sound of this is music,
the way she does things blows my brain,
to others may seem useless

am i a fool to think this way,
will she ever see,
for now i will wait the day,
that our love will be

i want to tell her but can i, how?
it makes me feel twisted inside,
how much more will my feelings allow,
to sit and wait by the side

i’ve got to show her just how i feel,
in the perfect kind of way,
and even if she can not deal,
it is the thing i have to say

I love you ____ with all my heart,
you fill me up with joy,
and although our love may never depart,
this moment we can enjoy.

Copyright Â© justjames ... [ 2004-08-13 00:24:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: the girl i love (User Rating: 1 )
by brokensoul on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:32:28 AM AEST
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" if you tell the he/she you love them they might break your heart. if you dont tell he/she you love them you might break theirs"
tell her you love her go for it if she rejects you HER DAMN LOSS! girls love poems give this to her and tell her its about her!!

Re: the girl i love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 12:51:49 AM AEST
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Give her a copy of this write.
Very good writing.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy

Re: the girl i love (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:44:26 AM AEST
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(tear) i know a guy named James and i wish he felt this way about me.. lol nah i'll be okay. Good write it is really touching and i hope that you get this girl you long for.
Corrupted_minds

Re: the girl i love (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 01:58:49 AM AEST
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if you dont tell her then she may get away and you will live out your life with what if? Sorry decissions is yours of course a reat write
Michelle

Re: the girl i love (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 03:08:08 AM AEST
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great write. I feel just like this.

dizza

Re: the girl i love (User Rating: 1 )
by dartsofplsre87 on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 04:33:21 AM AEST
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This is sweet. You should tell her.

Re: the girl i love (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 13th August 2004 @ 06:15:52 AM AEST
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awwwww this is lovely, it's also quite sad as you say you can't tell her, I am sure if you told her she would want to have a read of your wonderful writes about her :)

takecare
pixie xx

Re: the girl i love (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:42:28 PM AEST
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try your best, you just might catch her!
nice poem!

Tweek

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