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Array ( [sid] => 60074 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HOW COULD YOU?! [time] => 2004-08-14 00:49:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => how could you have thrown it all away?
i really hoped you and I were to stay,

how could you be so cold?
it was my heart that you stole,

how could you not care?
you don't even remember that we were a pair,

how could you say those hurtful things behind my back?
i didn't really think of you of the type to talk smack,

how could you make me cry for so long?
but it's okay, because now you've made me strong,

how could you think that everything is still cool?
it is in your heart that you let mine drown in your pool,

how could you leave me here in bleeding sorrow?
and now it is today that I wish for no tommorow. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 32 [informant] => yesi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

HOW COULD YOU?!

Contributed by yesi on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 12:49:51 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

how could you have thrown it all away?
i really hoped you and I were to stay,

how could you be so cold?
it was my heart that you stole,

how could you not care?
you don't even remember that we were a pair,

how could you say those hurtful things behind my back?
i didn't really think of you of the type to talk smack,

how could you make me cry for so long?
but it's okay, because now you've made me strong,

how could you think that everything is still cool?
it is in your heart that you let mine drown in your pool,

how could you leave me here in bleeding sorrow?
and now it is today that I wish for no tommorow.

Copyright © yesi ... [ 2004-08-14 00:49:51]
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Re: HOW COULD YOU?! (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Saturday, 14th August 2004 @ 08:08:10 AM AEST
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Thank you for writing this. It reminded me of a relationship that I recently had been broken off by the guy i was speaking with. He got upset at what i said and he just totally ignored me. Would not answer my e-mails and would not IM me neither. He has just come back into my life and is acting as if nothing has happened and wants things to be the way they were. I just can't do it what he did hurt me. It almost felt like he was punishing me and I'm a woman not a child. So as i read this i said to myself why even go back to that i deserve better and actually God has placed someone else in my path now and he gives me what i need. Never thought of that, what I need. Thanks for your inspirational words.

Re: HOW COULD YOU?! (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 12:45:33 PM AEST
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This writting is very, deeply heard.
You have proclaimed the words I feel I put
her thru. You have written something I have longed to hear. Thank you for helping in time
of understanding.

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