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Array ( [sid] => 60295 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Losin You [time] => 2004-08-16 07:08:05 [hometext] => Lost already [bodytext] => I think im Losin you
It's up to you, what to do
The thought of a loss
Breaks my heart
Breaks me to see us part

Friends are only friends when they wanna be
Took a blind man a minute to see
But still I can't help but love you
I wanted to run but you made me fall
But I still stand proud and tall
It dulls my thoughts
Endorphines flood my mind
And now im blind
I don't wanna see
What you've done to me

Some people will live a lie
Some people would rather die
I say live the truth
Live a life that is divine
Live a life like I live mine
I can love but I can hurt
Hate is just part of you
Nothing anyone can do

You won't catch me
Or break my fall
I suppose you wouldn't help at all
Im Losin you
And times wasting [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 16 [informant] => cj_ranson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Losin You

Contributed by cj_ranson on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:08:05 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I think im Losin you
It's up to you, what to do
The thought of a loss
Breaks my heart
Breaks me to see us part

Friends are only friends when they wanna be
Took a blind man a minute to see
But still I can't help but love you
I wanted to run but you made me fall
But I still stand proud and tall
It dulls my thoughts
Endorphines flood my mind
And now im blind
I don't wanna see
What you've done to me

Some people will live a lie
Some people would rather die
I say live the truth
Live a life that is divine
Live a life like I live mine
I can love but I can hurt
Hate is just part of you
Nothing anyone can do

You won't catch me
Or break my fall
I suppose you wouldn't help at all
Im Losin you
And times wasting

Copyright © cj_ranson ... [ 2004-08-16 07:08:05]
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Re: Losin You (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:49:39 AM AEST
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this was a very good poem, only thing I found was that some of the words you used to 'describe n rhyme' are used far too often in poems everywhere. I too have this problem, and it re-occurs through out my poetry. Although now I use a theasaurus more often.
Anyway congratulations for producing a decent piece of work, which is sad yet enjoyable to read.
Goood work
Alex

Re: Losin You (User Rating: 1 )
by Stellar on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:54:03 AM AEST
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I liked this. One line was almost like a line in a U2 song "The Sweetest Thing". One of my favorite songs.

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