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Array ( [sid] => 60354 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Retribution [time] => 2004-08-16 19:02:01 [hometext] => Retribution talks about how people are put down becuase of things they aren't able to do, yet, peer pressure push them to do those things and fail...badly. [bodytext] => Recognition, is just another way to put down those less fortunate
Bringing up anothers spirit will shut down another
Tears are all that should have to be said by he who loses the game
And that should tell you what you have created
A world that wants to hate because of material items
Let this message effuse to destroy what you hold dear

Forget about the world you hold dear
They are those who need help, but you're too lazy
You wont fight for our right to help those in need of help
This should show why we hate your soceity

I hope losing the game will bring you to shame
And more of what is really pain
Emancipation, retribution are they lies or just another forgotten reality? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Bones [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Retribution

Contributed by Bones on Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:02:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Recognition, is just another way to put down those less fortunate
Bringing up anothers spirit will shut down another
Tears are all that should have to be said by he who loses the game
And that should tell you what you have created
A world that wants to hate because of material items
Let this message effuse to destroy what you hold dear

Forget about the world you hold dear
They are those who need help, but you're too lazy
You wont fight for our right to help those in need of help
This should show why we hate your soceity

I hope losing the game will bring you to shame
And more of what is really pain
Emancipation, retribution are they lies or just another forgotten reality?

Copyright © Bones ... [ 2004-08-16 19:02:01]
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Re: Retribution (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 17th August 2004 @ 04:36:28 AM AEST
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This is a great poem. You write with a lot of strength

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