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Crimson Hearts
Contributed by
ender
on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 09:34:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Can u feel your lifeless heart?
wrapped with sheets of self control
to feel so much, and nothing all at once
drifting into nowhere, his wandering soul
His vagabond as a whole answered the call
of a mystic voice on this endless road
He told himself of the morbid fall
that we all must bare the sacred toll
His eternal soul returns to the One
who rose the moon and set the sun
immortal now, his soul must crawl
the price it pays for standing tall
A towering tall, fading throughout curious eyes
a certain vibe that darkens skies.
he takes all hope thats tossed his way
and keeps it all within his heart,
that died, and is left vacant today.
In his existence he got a messege
of a lovely dame that holds the essence
of his loves true name
In a moment of beauty
he fell in love
with the one girl
his thoughts werent of
But the bonds of time tread fairly not
they took her life, and broke his heart
this rover wandered throughout the day
on this endless road he stopped to pray
his heart is dead, his soul dismayed
then he heard a voice, so gently, say
"STRAYED FROM ME.......
........YOUVE LOST YOUR WAY"
So he let himself
pray to god
the spirit of one
and holy star
He could've lived in endless sorrow
but death appalled his life the most
he'll take his life in the lonesome morrow
before a dying sunset coast.
Copyright ©
ender
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2004-08-16 21:34:22]
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Re: Crimson Hearts
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 10:44:35 PM AEST
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| I typically overlook sucide notes (or suicide poetry) however your talent in previous writings made me want to read this. If one must write a suicide poem, let it be like this. This was breath taking, and humbled me to a degree. Great job! |
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