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Array ( [sid] => 60569 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Emotional Explosion! [time] => 2004-08-18 11:25:02 [hometext] => It happened a few years back. I was in foster care at the time, so I didn't fall into the open mouth of the streets, but my temper did cost me a school for 6 months. I ain't proud! But this is what went on in my brain...! PLEASE COMMENT ON MY WORK! [bodytext] => Feeling crushed,
Under the rubble.
Where imagination twists,
And bursts all happy bubbles.

Inhaling oxygen.
Polluted by words.
Snapped by low confidence,
I fall straight into the dirt.

Drowning inside my fears.
I find I can't stand.
That, I fall when I try.
And I can't quite grip their hands...

Suffocated by my fears,
I pray to one day, be under-stood.
As I push out my fist,
And ***** from under my hood... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 61 [informant] => deathdrop [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

My Emotional Explosion!

Contributed by deathdrop on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:25:02 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Feeling crushed,
Under the rubble.
Where imagination twists,
And bursts all happy bubbles.

Inhaling oxygen.
Polluted by words.
Snapped by low confidence,
I fall straight into the dirt.

Drowning inside my fears.
I find I can't stand.
That, I fall when I try.
And I can't quite grip their hands...

Suffocated by my fears,
I pray to one day, be under-stood.
As I push out my fist,
And ***** from under my hood...

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-08-18 11:25:02]
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Re: My Emotional Explosion! (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Wednesday, 18th August 2004 @ 11:57:04 AM AEST
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I loved this poem! I have also been in foster care and gone through the whole "school" thing and in trouble with the law..... so I know what it is like. Going through foster care and all that bull**** isn't easy so if you ever need somone to talk to just send me a message.
ALINA

Re: My Emotional Explosion! (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 06:16:31 AM AEST
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Feelings I can relate to... beautiful write. Never stop writing for I love your work.
love always
corrupted_minds

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