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Array ( [sid] => 60911 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Chicago, you lazy bum [time] => 2004-08-21 12:08:39 [hometext] => ... [bodytext] => I am back Chicago!
But you,
you haven’t moved an inch,
you just sat here looking like THAT while I was gone?
Silly me, of course you never do anything worth while
you just drift through history, poetry, and cabaret songs,
without making any significant contributions.
Well, Chicago, I kayaked through the River Styx,
and slept on wigs of hay
and you?
My GOD you are pale!
I feel like I don’t know you anymore,
with your odd dialect and obnoxious personality.
You should have seen me Chicago,
I had this spiritual quest
(which you would never let me take!)
and found cities can be beautiful,
not like you
you foul flushed out couch potato.
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Chicago, you lazy bum

Contributed by Ina on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 12:08:39 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

I am back Chicago!
But you,
you haven’t moved an inch,
you just sat here looking like THAT while I was gone?
Silly me, of course you never do anything worth while
you just drift through history, poetry, and cabaret songs,
without making any significant contributions.
Well, Chicago, I kayaked through the River Styx,
and slept on wigs of hay
and you?
My GOD you are pale!
I feel like I don’t know you anymore,
with your odd dialect and obnoxious personality.
You should have seen me Chicago,
I had this spiritual quest
(which you would never let me take!)
and found cities can be beautiful,
not like you
you foul flushed out couch potato.

Copyright Â© Ina ... [ 2004-08-21 12:08:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Chicago, you lazy bum (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 12:44:44 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed your peom great write

Puppy :)

Re: Chicago, you lazy bum (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 01:45:16 PM AEST
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i really liked this ina...perfectly unique as always...just perfect

Re: Chicago, you lazy bum (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:48:35 PM AEST
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I like this! Very unique... form title to fabulous last line. You've drawn me in... I think I need to read more of you work!

Well done,
SNM

Re: Chicago, you lazy bum (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:24:16 PM AEST
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I felt like this is a poem I'd read in a book. It feels proffesional if that means anything. Precisely said. You expressed alot, years of experience in Chicago, in a very short space, and that is what I mean by professional. But I'm not a critiqe (sp?) Reminds me of a beat poem.

you foul flushed out couch potato

lol....well said.

Be true,
zenmind

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