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Confused
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:32:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Hand me my heart back
Let me live again
See this world as I saw it before
Not as I see it now
My ways have changed
Im not the same
I am half alone
Unknown to what I want
Im so confused
My mind is shot
What has happened to who I am
To who I was not long ago
I have forgotten
I have lost myself in this world Im in
Can I go back
Can I be who I was before
Can I live once more
As who I really am?
Or will I be stuck
Confused about who I am
Confused about what happened
Who I became and why?
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pyrofungus
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2004-08-21 15:32:10]
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Re: Confused
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by waos on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 04:39:05 PM AEST
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i totally was going through that same kind of thing for a while, and i guess i still am though it isn't as foremost in my mind. i lost who i used to be too, all that childhood innocence. but you did a really good job on that poem cause i could relate to it a lot. but i gues the things we've learned becoming who we now are, are invaluable, at least to me they are. and i wouldn't give those up to get back who i used to be.
sorry i blabbered. good write.
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Re: Confused
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:35:06 AM AEST
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I like this, some of the lines are very emotional. I suggest you start using stanzas, they give the poem substance. You have talent. Keep it up.
Peace and Kumquats With Love
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Re: Confused
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by tears_of_blood on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 01:44:10 PM AEST
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thats was i good write man iam in the same boat iam chaging my was and trying to get every thing i had back keep you poems coming
brad |
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Re: Confused
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:48:31 PM AEST
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| Things can change us, or we think we've changed. We grow..we learn. Is that change? A flower grows but it's the same flower... |
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