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Array ( [sid] => 60934 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Loss [time] => 2004-08-21 17:40:29 [hometext] => I wrote this peom cause of a accident i was in years ago, i was in a coma and was left with head injury and suffered from some memory losses. [bodytext] => Today, I lost my Self,
I woke up, I was somebody else,
I am happy to be alive,
even though, i felt like a part of me has died,
The memories of my past,
has gone away, they did not last,
This loss, shattered my dreams,
lost my self identity,
or so it seems,
I know im different, things has changed,
I know im different, im not the same,
It would be easy to find someone to blame,
In a new world of pain and despair,
I cant help but say that life isnt fair,
I know i act ungrateful, i know i dont care,
But those memories of my past life just isnt there. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Jenn2004 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Loss

Contributed by Jenn2004 on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 05:40:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Today, I lost my Self,
I woke up, I was somebody else,
I am happy to be alive,
even though, i felt like a part of me has died,
The memories of my past,
has gone away, they did not last,
This loss, shattered my dreams,
lost my self identity,
or so it seems,
I know im different, things has changed,
I know im different, im not the same,
It would be easy to find someone to blame,
In a new world of pain and despair,
I cant help but say that life isnt fair,
I know i act ungrateful, i know i dont care,
But those memories of my past life just isnt there.

Copyright © Jenn2004 ... [ 2004-08-21 17:40:29]
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Re: Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 06:10:07 PM AEST
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Awww Jenn..I am so sorry to hear that.... I am glad tho, that you are here now and able to write about it.....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:46:29 AM AEST
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wow, this must have been very frightening for you *hugs* as Jenni K said, it is good that you now can write about it,

good write, thanks for sharing,

pixie xx

Re: Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 05:46:33 AM AEST
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Though its a bit sad..well written..well expressed of your mind.. God bless you. venkat

Re: Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 06:45:56 AM AEST
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Sorry for your accident and loss of memory, but glad you are alive to tell us all about it in poetic form.
I hope the future is good for you

steve

Re: Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 12:40:47 AM AEST
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I was taken by your Title of this write. Loss
and as I read further I was sadden by your lost oh so recently it seems. Hoping your strengths are behind you and your memeries of coming todays make the void more easier to bear.

God Bless

Moe

Re: Loss (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:22:58 AM AEST
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I agree with Jenni.
sometimes a person needs to loose some memories.
I can only imagene how u felt when u wrote this.
Awesome writing!
luv, huggs, thanks,
emy

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