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Pulsating Beats Of A Dead Heart
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
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Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 10:05:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the meaningless silence that runs between our lives at this moment does not make sense even to the blindest of eyes but who does this belong to this cloud of the wicked lies
shattering the truth in our souls while forgetting what were made of who holds us back from our triumphs and victories it seems that our little escapades have now become pointles stories
paralyzing the words of true love that flow from my lips into your ears is it coincedence that we met the way that we met that day helplessley my heart lies within the hands while forgetting away
an unknown passion is running through my blood filled viens at this moment our moments of contact, verbal or physical, are overwhelming who is holding us back from what we can become, tell me
swallowing the vomit of the hurtful truths we tend to hear from eachother i tend to hold the tears in my head as my dreams are released weve gone from the top of the world to the bottom of the least
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2004-08-22 22:05:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Pulsating Beats Of A Dead Heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dizza_13 on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 01:34:38 AM AEST (User
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touching write. Great flow
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Re: Pulsating Beats Of A Dead Heart
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 06:32:56 PM AEST (User
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wow this was powerful. The title of this poem
really drew me in and I loved the poeticized
sadness that drenched these lines. I loved
the first line in the last stanza... actually I loved
it all.
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