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Array ( [sid] => 61173 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Gotta let go [time] => 2004-08-23 19:51:23 [hometext] => have to let a guy go who you really thought you had something with but he waited to long and you just have to let go. [bodytext] => i dont know what to do no more
I dont know what to say
I dont know how i feel
Cause you keep playin me this way.

I wanna be with you
But then again I dont
I wanna hold you close
But deep inside it hurts.

I wanna cry right now
But i know i wont stop.
for these things you do to me
is tearing me apart.

I wish you could only see
That we are ment to be.
I wish you'd only see
im no better then thee.

I hate to end it now
after everything i've done
What can i do
Im not gettin any where?

I have to stop trying
I have to give up
For all this pain
Has to be enough

It hurts me more to let you go
What else am i to do?
If your not willing to let me in
this has got to be the end. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 32 [informant] => all4him [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Gotta let go

Contributed by all4him on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:51:23 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

i dont know what to do no more
I dont know what to say
I dont know how i feel
Cause you keep playin me this way.

I wanna be with you
But then again I dont
I wanna hold you close
But deep inside it hurts.

I wanna cry right now
But i know i wont stop.
for these things you do to me
is tearing me apart.

I wish you could only see
That we are ment to be.
I wish you'd only see
im no better then thee.

I hate to end it now
after everything i've done
What can i do
Im not gettin any where?

I have to stop trying
I have to give up
For all this pain
Has to be enough

It hurts me more to let you go
What else am i to do?
If your not willing to let me in
this has got to be the end.

Copyright © all4him ... [ 2004-08-23 19:51:23]
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Re: Gotta let go (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 07:59:14 PM AEST
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Greatly written and many times I've had to do the same.
Good work even tho sad.
Hang tuff and keep the faith.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Gotta let go (User Rating: 1 )
by rhyme_me_to_sleep on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 08:30:51 PM AEST
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Its hell to be played, if they can't return it then they don't deserve it.

great write.

Re: Gotta let go (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 09:46:48 PM AEST
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I said similar things to my boyfriend when I broke up with him. It was and still is very hard to deal with the fact that you have to let that one go.

Re: Gotta let go (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 10:29:40 PM AEST
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amazing and heartfelt write. you were strong enough to make the decision you are strong enough to see it through. =]

Re: Gotta let go (User Rating: 1 )
by positivelypurple on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 01:19:02 AM AEST
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Hmmm - I am going through something similar right now. It is torcher. Nice write!

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