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Array ( [sid] => 6124 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° [time] => 2002-11-03 04:30:00 [hometext] => A time in my life i really wanted to die, and would have had i stayed... [bodytext] => I relived tonight just like old times
Locked all my doors, and closed my blinds
My phone unplugged, my windows all locked
I sat for a while, and myself i rocked

My mind went through old dreams i've had
A poisoned girl that you made sad
I stared in the mirror a while at me
And all i could see was your words "ugly"

Cocaine poured on my mirror cold
Made fine with my razor then lined in rows
A straw from my cup cut partly in half
My nose in a playground that made me laugh

It made me want more, it made me paranoid
But i had to find a way to fill this void
It related with me and how i feel about you
It was hard to put down, hard not to do

Mirror all clean and my sleeves pulled up
I took that razor to see my blood
I ached to feel just one thing inside
The lines of my pain have your name outlined

I twirled my long hair through my fingers red
I rubbed my neck, and wished on death
I saw your face as i closed my eyes
I stopped laughing when you said "Just go die"

My tears dripped down my bloody wrists
My body shook as i made a fist
I punched my leg and i pulled my hair
I had nothing to lose, you didnt care

I tasted my blood and my eyes opened slow
I wanted to love you, but you had to go
I'm just another line in your huge chalkboard
Of women you had, but then ended up bored

Each time i hurt from your words of hate
I cut some more for your small mistakes
If you had trusted in my warm soul
I'd have led you to beautiful places untold

Now that i've relived this pain tonight
It wasn't my time, to pass on and die
I had some visions of you and me
Now go with her, and smile and be free

I've played in this playground at times before
The devil he took my heart and tore
He swings me forward then pulls me around
And welcomes me to his red playground




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°°°Devil's Red Playground°°°

Contributed by OreO on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I relived tonight just like old times
Locked all my doors, and closed my blinds
My phone unplugged, my windows all locked
I sat for a while, and myself i rocked

My mind went through old dreams i've had
A poisoned girl that you made sad
I stared in the mirror a while at me
And all i could see was your words "ugly"

Cocaine poured on my mirror cold
Made fine with my razor then lined in rows
A straw from my cup cut partly in half
My nose in a playground that made me laugh

It made me want more, it made me paranoid
But i had to find a way to fill this void
It related with me and how i feel about you
It was hard to put down, hard not to do

Mirror all clean and my sleeves pulled up
I took that razor to see my blood
I ached to feel just one thing inside
The lines of my pain have your name outlined

I twirled my long hair through my fingers red
I rubbed my neck, and wished on death
I saw your face as i closed my eyes
I stopped laughing when you said "Just go die"

My tears dripped down my bloody wrists
My body shook as i made a fist
I punched my leg and i pulled my hair
I had nothing to lose, you didnt care

I tasted my blood and my eyes opened slow
I wanted to love you, but you had to go
I'm just another line in your huge chalkboard
Of women you had, but then ended up bored

Each time i hurt from your words of hate
I cut some more for your small mistakes
If you had trusted in my warm soul
I'd have led you to beautiful places untold

Now that i've relived this pain tonight
It wasn't my time, to pass on and die
I had some visions of you and me
Now go with her, and smile and be free

I've played in this playground at times before
The devil he took my heart and tore
He swings me forward then pulls me around
And welcomes me to his red playground








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Re: °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 05:52:21 AM AEST
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Wow! Oreo real touching,I'm glad you overcame this!Great poetry, Christina


Re: °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 06:38:04 AM AEST
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Awesome write, OreO!!! So sad and heart wrenching.. Am glad you're here today to tell about it..... Hope all is well now..
Hugs,
Jenni


Re: °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 09:06:24 AM AEST
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Wow... Oreo, I love your writing!! I'm glad you didn't give in to that devil's playground...

~Dani


Re: °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 01:49:23 PM AEST
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Wonderful write ... very emotional. Glad to see you're still here and you didn't succumb to the pain.


Re: °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 03:44:12 PM AEST
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Wow oreo, that must have been a hard on to share with us. I'm glad you did though, it's phenomenal! Glad you made it through.

Curtis


Re: °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Metalmouth666 on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 01:49:19 AM AEST
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I love this, this is a hard subject to comment on but I just needed to. it is better than what I written in the past but I am glad you and I am no where near that playground
~MetalMouth


Re: °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:08:18 AM AEST
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All I can say is...Astounding ! Roses at your feet for this work of art.


Re: °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by SMG on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 02:33:12 AM AEST
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ashes to ashes, faith no more!
your poem sent there my thoughts


Re: °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 07:02:24 AM AEST
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beautifully written, and so full of everything...well done


Re: °°°Devil's Red Playground°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by darkeyedman on Sunday, 24th November 2002 @ 11:31:20 PM AEST
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powerful! really good write. jim




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