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Once
Contributed by
Opium
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Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I don't know what I like about my Teddy Bear
This cotton made puppet with a stupid stare
I've had him from a long time ago
Who brought him to me I still don't know
My childhood in him I find
Thou he has no heart nor mind
My secrets and worries to him I tail
My love adventures whenever I fail
Our friendship is like this little toy
You were there in my sadness and my joy
We may not talk or meet at all
But you are there for me each time I fall
I wish I can hug you like my Teddy Bear
And tell you face to face how much I care
But then I don't want to see you whilst you know
That once I loved you, once ...a long time ago.
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Re: Once
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by OreO on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 06:30:35 AM AEST
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Aww this is so sweet
I enjoyed reading this alot
Keep em' coming
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Re: Once
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 07:22:21 AM AEST
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This is really beautiful....I enjoyed it a great deal...
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Re: Once
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by TiNyOnE on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 08:16:11 AM AEST
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I really like this poem because i can really relate to it. Keep up the good work. lol
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Re: Once
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by gina on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 01:58:41 AM AEST
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I stood you nagging for years and years
i had to carry all of your tears
i was there for you , i slept by your side
you were killing me man holding me that tight
You kissed me, we played when happy,whereas
when you had a bad date you kicked my ass
i don't understand i'm just a toy
left in the hands of a Moody bad boy
Day after day i ended under bed
why you bought me!?i wish you never had!
you found me there,old ,dirty and crashed
you bought another one and threw me in the trash
See my friends what i have to bear
just because im a little tiny bear
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Re: Once
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by gina on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:04:09 AM AEST
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just correcting my last lines:)
See my friends what i have to bear
just because i'm a little Teddy Bear
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