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Array ( [sid] => 61284 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => drown me [time] => 2004-08-24 21:18:50 [hometext] => [bodytext] => your love surrounds me
like the air i breathe
i suffocate in you
and there's no need
to bring me up for air

not when i'm drowning in you

give me everything there is of you
from stormy rivers to the oceans blue
no waves to dangerous no act too rude
i'm dyin to drown
dyin to drown in you

i feel the break of light
upon my face
a drop of your love
and i can't take
everything you have to offer me

don't keep me floating let me sink

give me everything there is of you
from stormy rivers to the oceans blue
no waves too dangerous, no act too rude
i'm dyin to drown
dyin to drown in you

do my oceans meet yours
do you feel the rain pour
from my lake to your shore

please
let
me
drown
in
you
i'm
beg-ging
for
your
dark
blue
let
me
hit
that
ocean
floor
so
i
can
breathe
in
you

so give me everything there is of you
from stormy rivers to the oceans blue
no waves too dangerous i'm beggin you
give me one night of that
deep
dark
blue...

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 43 [informant] => taintedorange21 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

drown me

Contributed by taintedorange21 on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 09:18:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

your love surrounds me
like the air i breathe
i suffocate in you
and there's no need
to bring me up for air

not when i'm drowning in you

give me everything there is of you
from stormy rivers to the oceans blue
no waves to dangerous no act too rude
i'm dyin to drown
dyin to drown in you

i feel the break of light
upon my face
a drop of your love
and i can't take
everything you have to offer me

don't keep me floating let me sink

give me everything there is of you
from stormy rivers to the oceans blue
no waves too dangerous, no act too rude
i'm dyin to drown
dyin to drown in you

do my oceans meet yours
do you feel the rain pour
from my lake to your shore

please
let
me
drown
in
you
i'm
beg-ging
for
your
dark
blue
let
me
hit
that
ocean
floor
so
i
can
breathe
in
you

so give me everything there is of you
from stormy rivers to the oceans blue
no waves too dangerous i'm beggin you
give me one night of that
deep
dark
blue...

Copyright © taintedorange21 ... [ 2004-08-24 21:18:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: drown me (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:03:10 PM AEST
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i absolutely adore how you word things, that was just as good as the other one i read of yours.. dude i'm just gonna go down the list of yours.. thanks for posting i really liked it.

Re: drown me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 24th August 2004 @ 10:28:57 PM AEST
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fantastic write. =]

Re: drown me (User Rating: 1 )
by jessadawn on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 07:10:45 PM AEST
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I loved this poem...it was really awesome. You really put emotion into your poetry....Nice. :)

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