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A Glass Of Poison
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:18:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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You cannot empty me
For I am already empty
Happiness was lost slowly
This time
Yet it was still all emptied again
I thought it would go away
That feeling from before
Wasnt supposed to come back
I felt it coming
I wanted to ignore that too
I was trying
But it came
And took over what I felt
It became a monster
I started freaking out
I was supposed to be better
To be happy
But I cant
I will always end up empty
Filling up on occasion
Emptying out as I take in more air
The air is not pure
Is not healthy to breathe
It was infected
With others diseases
That I breathed in
Yet thought it was pure
But knew it wasnt
But thought I was, could be immune
I shouldve known
That I was not
I became infected
Once more
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pyrofungus
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2004-08-25 13:18:56]
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Re: A Glass Of Poison
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 01:53:53 PM AEST
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hey, if you ever need a friend *hugs* I am here Summer , don';t be afraid to ask for some help, we all need help at some point in our lives...
pixie xx |
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Re: A Glass Of Poison
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by Dragontear27 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:20:20 PM AEST
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You shouldn't try to keep everything inside Summer you need to let things out once in awile. Being an independant person is fine but that doesnt mean you can't use some help now and then. But maybe i'm wrong to say things i might not even know about. I've known you long enough to make mistakes about what you feel and what you're going through, any old feeling you've had will come back i should know that all to well. If I can do anything to help you with what you're going through you know where to reach me xoxo. Great poem by the way.
~~lates~~ Pat |
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Re: A Glass Of Poison
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 09:44:32 PM AEST
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| excellent write. feelings dont go away they just replace themselves over and over. |
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Re: A Glass Of Poison
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 04:52:19 AM AEST
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with me, it doesn't seem to matter how much i can heal because in an instant, i go ack to being nothing.
i can strongly relate to you poetry and life.
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Re: A Glass Of Poison
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 07:49:33 PM AEST
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| well i don't really know what to say the poem was nice, very nice. i liked how it was real, you could feel this peice dripping with the sober reality of someones true heart. you expressed yourself very well here. i hope things start to get better. |
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