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Essex
Contributed by
pastiche247
on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:23:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Away go the flatlands Quilted in fields of intricate green, Breast-like with pasture and Mushroomed with woods Tilting at old Saxon churches; Sniffing the salt in the Cold northern sea, Sensing invasion
Away from the eye go The delicate veins, the streams And the secretive rivers; With shiver and fur of Each tiny heartbeat, Fox and the owl and Dirty faced swans, Old names corrupted
Away from the modern The cottages stand, flowered And scented, lost in the heart Of some history beating; Pretending with cricket And afternoon tea, Saluting the oak With the faintest of smiles
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Re: Essex
(User Rating: 1 ) by RhythmBndt on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 09:29:55 AM AEST (User
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Very nice. Beautiful imagery :) |
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Re: Essex
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 11:26:19 AM AEST (User
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Very nice picture you write!
My sons school name is Essex! Christina |
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Re: Essex
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 05:39:28 PM AEST (User
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In person, I hope one day to visit the setting that was painted in my mind by those words. A wonderful write. Thank you for the mental photo.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Essex
(User Rating: 1 ) by Adam_me2 on
Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 08:16:34 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful imagery. I like the contrast between paragraph1 and paragraph2 . |
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Re: Essex
(User Rating: 1 ) by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 05:31:21 PM AEST (User
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God how i miss Essex. This just brought back wonderful memories for me.
Thank god i saw this.
Jane~ |
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