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Array ( [sid] => 61690 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Welcoming The Uninvited [time] => 2004-08-28 14:11:28 [hometext] => everything has an ending, everything leaves a mark, what will your mark be.... [bodytext] => small and insignificent
holding back the magnificent
you have now become our strength
humbleness has brought you depth

you were always sitting outside
and you must be hurting inside
you never once complained aloud
holding strong quietly to mock the proud

begotten truths have compelled you
hypocrites and priests have damned you
leaving out all of their gory details
they make you martyrs, but called you suicidals

do not fight back children of few
no matter what, they wont accept you
final moments always continue to start
dont lose faith of whats in your heart

try to end what never started
never leave from the departed
arguments of wrong and right
show them please the true light

they hold close to cival humanity
only to themselves they show gratuity
and in the endless field of flowers
your soul is noticed in tears of showers [comments] => 4 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 13 [informant] => abnormalpunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Welcoming The Uninvited

Contributed by abnormalpunk on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 02:11:28 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



small and insignificent
holding back the magnificent
you have now become our strength
humbleness has brought you depth

you were always sitting outside
and you must be hurting inside
you never once complained aloud
holding strong quietly to mock the proud

begotten truths have compelled you
hypocrites and priests have damned you
leaving out all of their gory details
they make you martyrs, but called you suicidals

do not fight back children of few
no matter what, they wont accept you
final moments always continue to start
dont lose faith of whats in your heart

try to end what never started
never leave from the departed
arguments of wrong and right
show them please the true light

they hold close to cival humanity
only to themselves they show gratuity
and in the endless field of flowers
your soul is noticed in tears of showers




Copyright © abnormalpunk ... [ 2004-08-28 14:11:28]
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Re: Welcoming The Uninvited (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 02:38:56 PM AEST
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Wow dark indeed, can they invent a deeper shade of black?...still you write well, ...and have left a mark

thankyou for sharing

kelly x



Re: Welcoming The Uninvited (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 05:15:20 PM AEST
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this poem is so stereotypically "emo"... a tip for next time... be more original... this write had no umph... i was bored through the whole thing..... (sound familiar? How does it feel. Tact and a little human kindess would be nice when you comment to others).


Re: Welcoming The Uninvited (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:13:50 PM AEST
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excellent poem. really nice.


Re: Welcoming The Uninvited (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:09:16 AM AEST
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Yikes.




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