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Array ( [sid] => 61700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => blood letters ii [time] => 2004-08-28 16:04:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => these blood letters
the letters i carved out of my flesh
and with the blood i wrote my plead upon the walls 4 you
this blade which i carved promises to you
this blood in which i bled my love for you
was meaningless and wasted
you looked upon them and wrote over it

see if these blood letters would get a skin deep answer
then maybe i would be freebut these worthless scars and blood that has poured for you
has been overlooked as nothing more than a waste
as you look upon these blood stained walls
just realise and look upon also what waqs the cause
of the blood written letters on the blood stained walls
pushed away without answers
knocked back down everytime
so much blood wasted don you every single ***** time
for what nothing ***** all the only thing i ever wanted was a second of your precious time.

just remember me when you see the blood staine dpavement
from my blood stained heart
please rember your daughter ione day
remeber why you never rescued me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 6 [informant] => grip-wth-broken-fingers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

blood letters ii

Contributed by grip-wth-broken-fingers on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 04:04:27 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

these blood letters
the letters i carved out of my flesh
and with the blood i wrote my plead upon the walls 4 you
this blade which i carved promises to you
this blood in which i bled my love for you
was meaningless and wasted
you looked upon them and wrote over it

see if these blood letters would get a skin deep answer
then maybe i would be freebut these worthless scars and blood that has poured for you
has been overlooked as nothing more than a waste
as you look upon these blood stained walls
just realise and look upon also what waqs the cause
of the blood written letters on the blood stained walls
pushed away without answers
knocked back down everytime
so much blood wasted don you every single ***** time
for what nothing ***** all the only thing i ever wanted was a second of your precious time.

just remember me when you see the blood staine dpavement
from my blood stained heart
please rember your daughter ione day
remeber why you never rescued me

Copyright © grip-wth-broken-fingers ... [ 2004-08-28 16:04:27]
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Re: blood letters ii (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 05:53:42 PM AEST
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At least this suggests the reasons for your self-violence. That to me is more interesting than just writing about suicidal tendencies. --Mothy

Re: blood letters ii (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 06:20:30 PM AEST
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this is scary stuff. i love your work, as ever and always, it's amazing!

Re: blood letters ii (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:01:42 PM AEST
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i agree with moth. excellent write. the redudancy doesnt annoy me like it usually does. keep up the great work. other people shouldnt matter, they arent always going to be there. only yourself should matter because you will be there every time for yourself.

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