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Lowly and weary
Remorseful am I

Sitting alone
As the tears fill my eye

Aching and awful
And so full of shame

Breaking a sweat
All for somebody's name

Wishing these times
Will soon be a rare few

Needing to run
To an open-armed you
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I Need Your Open Arms

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 08:30:47 PM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Lowly and weary
Remorseful am I

Sitting alone
As the tears fill my eye

Aching and awful
And so full of shame

Breaking a sweat
All for somebody's name

Wishing these times
Will soon be a rare few

Needing to run
To an open-armed you

Copyright Â© liquidsunshine ... [ 2004-08-28 20:30:47]
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Re: I Need Your Open Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 09:01:49 PM AEST
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great write. good thing you have this person in your life =]

Re: I Need Your Open Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:50:32 AM AEST
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awwww so sweet, its good to know someone is there to comfort you, many warm wishes, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: I Need Your Open Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:56:26 PM AEST
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This was very well wrote..I really liked it alot...

AfterDark..

Re: I Need Your Open Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 06:24:46 PM AEST
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I can certainly sympathise with your plight, Chelsea. What a hard thing this must be to face. Keep your courage, and may God guide you.
Slàn
Andrew

Re: I Need Your Open Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 07:37:44 AM AEST
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He is always there for us. Isn't it frustrating how worked up we can get over others, when He is the only one who ever really matters...won't let us down...will always be there? We can be so emotionally stupid. Sigh. You are so young and so wise to see this so clearly and express it so well.
Stitch

Re: I Need Your Open Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:08:11 PM AEST
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Once again, you express your heart so eloquently in words. Sometimes, though, it seems to be tempting to run away from your problems by running to *him*. Just make sure *he* is helping you get through your problems, not only escape them. Unless, of course, the Him is God....then by all means, find solace in Him.
~Carrie~

Re: I Need Your Open Arms (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:03:21 PM AEST
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We always need someone that we can turn to when all else fails.
Well written. It was short, but I think it was supposed to be.
Take care.
David

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