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Array ( [sid] => 61813 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sorry [time] => 2004-08-29 13:27:10 [hometext] => I like this poem even though it doesnt really have a beat it just tells a story. Its not tru but im sure to someone it might be [bodytext] => Daddy said sorry doesnt cut it anymore
But, what Daddy doesnt see is when sorry doesnt cut it,
It ends up cutting my heart.

Thousands of little cuts
All on my heart
Teaching me not to
say sorry anymore
But what will they lead up to
What will happen when I stop saying it
The little cuts will bleed soon
so I have to stop saying....sorry

I go to school and drop your book
You told me to say sorry.
I didnt say it, I couldnt say it
So, all I said was sorry doesnt cut it

I went to work and got your order wrong
You told me to say sorry.
I didnt say it, I couldnt say it
So, all I said was sorry doesnt cut it

I went to practice and knocked you down
you told me to say sorry.
BUt, I didnt say it, I couldnt say it
So, all I said was sorry doesnt cut it.

I went home and broke a vase
with everyone telling me to say sorry i swear it slipped
I hope you didnt hear
I can still hear myself yelling IM SORRY I DIDNT MEAN IT.
I can hear you yelling SORRY DOESNT CUT IT.

But, what you didnt know was that that last sorry was going to finish me off
make me bleed and cry and scream
I swore to you you wouldnt hear sorry again
I broke my promise I LIED I LIED.

But daddy i swear you wont hear sorry again.
After tonight, see that sorry broke through
I let it sink in and then I knew what I had to do.

So that night I said my prayers and this is how they went:
When I die before I wake I pray lord you will keep me safe
I cant say pleaz or sorry or maybe but all i know is my heart is bleeding
Keep me here let me die. Either way I will cry. Dear lord I pray keep me safe as this knife goes its way.

As my Dad read the note that layed beside my cold body all he said is...dear child....im sorry.
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Sorry

Contributed by iPaRtYiNpInK12 on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:27:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Daddy said sorry doesnt cut it anymore
But, what Daddy doesnt see is when sorry doesnt cut it,
It ends up cutting my heart.

Thousands of little cuts
All on my heart
Teaching me not to
say sorry anymore
But what will they lead up to
What will happen when I stop saying it
The little cuts will bleed soon
so I have to stop saying....sorry

I go to school and drop your book
You told me to say sorry.
I didnt say it, I couldnt say it
So, all I said was sorry doesnt cut it

I went to work and got your order wrong
You told me to say sorry.
I didnt say it, I couldnt say it
So, all I said was sorry doesnt cut it

I went to practice and knocked you down
you told me to say sorry.
BUt, I didnt say it, I couldnt say it
So, all I said was sorry doesnt cut it.

I went home and broke a vase
with everyone telling me to say sorry i swear it slipped
I hope you didnt hear
I can still hear myself yelling IM SORRY I DIDNT MEAN IT.
I can hear you yelling SORRY DOESNT CUT IT.

But, what you didnt know was that that last sorry was going to finish me off
make me bleed and cry and scream
I swore to you you wouldnt hear sorry again
I broke my promise I LIED I LIED.

But daddy i swear you wont hear sorry again.
After tonight, see that sorry broke through
I let it sink in and then I knew what I had to do.

So that night I said my prayers and this is how they went:
When I die before I wake I pray lord you will keep me safe
I cant say pleaz or sorry or maybe but all i know is my heart is bleeding
Keep me here let me die. Either way I will cry. Dear lord I pray keep me safe as this knife goes its way.

As my Dad read the note that layed beside my cold body all he said is...dear child....im sorry.




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Re: Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:04:47 PM AEST
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I really liked the ending. I have a very ironic sense of humor, so I found it quite hilarious, though not in a ha ha sort of way. Good job.


Re: Sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 07:31:22 PM AEST
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Great Write but very sad one * tear * lol okay well good job !!!




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