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Array ( [sid] => 61820 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Beautifully Horrid [time] => 2004-08-29 15:22:08 [hometext] => If finishing is the end... why do things keep on going.... [bodytext] => against the flow of time you battle existence
holding back the truths of life
giving visions of pain to the people
through the beauty of a knife

forbidden pleasures are locked in your closet
and you have lost the only key
now those pleasures have turned to nightmares
all of which are breaking free

this shouldnt be the climax of honesty
in the middle of a lie
as your mascara runs down your lifeless cheeks
you let the bullets all pass by

tortured by the unconditional love you have
youve tried to through it away
the never-dying pains that truth has cost you
deteriorize your heart everyday

forget all of the problems youve caused
which make your life hard
and you must face reality in all this
of all the chances youve barred [comments] => 2 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 61 [informant] => AbnormalPunk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Beautifully Horrid

Contributed by AbnormalPunk on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:22:08 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

against the flow of time you battle existence
holding back the truths of life
giving visions of pain to the people
through the beauty of a knife

forbidden pleasures are locked in your closet
and you have lost the only key
now those pleasures have turned to nightmares
all of which are breaking free

this shouldnt be the climax of honesty
in the middle of a lie
as your mascara runs down your lifeless cheeks
you let the bullets all pass by

tortured by the unconditional love you have
youve tried to through it away
the never-dying pains that truth has cost you
deteriorize your heart everyday

forget all of the problems youve caused
which make your life hard
and you must face reality in all this
of all the chances youve barred

Copyright © AbnormalPunk ... [ 2004-08-29 15:22:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Beautifully Horrid (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:12:03 PM AEST
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Hey Jer...you are pretty good aren't you... you gossamer dewy boy with diaphenous wings of dappled honey and stuff

Love ya

kell x

Re: Beautifully Horrid (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:04:23 AM AEST
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Woah! Beautifully powerful poem. I love the choice of words here. I don't think you could have portrayed the feeling any better.

-Kristin

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