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Array ( [sid] => 61896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Counterfeit Grin [time] => 2004-08-30 10:57:56 [hometext] => Impressions of the emotional deceptions we undertake socially when experiencing inner turmoil. [bodytext] => Many faces guard the path
Leading toward my soul
As time elapses,
Through untold changes
Life will seize its desperate toll

Loneliness and fears take over
Pushing sense beyond my reach
No longer can I bear the heartache
Growing olds’ begun to teach

Gaze upon my face in daylight
Subtle camber/ young skins glow
Inside my heart lie
torn & tattered
Shattered but for new bloods flow

Someone fix me!
Cry I
Outward,
Upward,
Spreading to the sky
It carries to the highest winds
Yet returns a silent, blank reply

Every day revives my seeking
Striving forth to find a cure
And when I catch your gaze upon me
I lie with smiles I wish were pure. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 61 [informant] => psyche [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Counterfeit Grin

Contributed by psyche on Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:57:56 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Many faces guard the path
Leading toward my soul
As time elapses,
Through untold changes
Life will seize its desperate toll

Loneliness and fears take over
Pushing sense beyond my reach
No longer can I bear the heartache
Growing olds’ begun to teach

Gaze upon my face in daylight
Subtle camber/ young skins glow
Inside my heart lie
torn & tattered
Shattered but for new bloods flow

Someone fix me!
Cry I
Outward,
Upward,
Spreading to the sky
It carries to the highest winds
Yet returns a silent, blank reply

Every day revives my seeking
Striving forth to find a cure
And when I catch your gaze upon me
I lie with smiles I wish were pure.

Copyright Â© psyche ... [ 2004-08-30 10:57:56]
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Re: Counterfeit Grin (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:32:38 PM AEST
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Whoa........you have no idea......I'm......um......that was......you're.......I mean.....wow.

~Jen

Re: Counterfeit Grin (User Rating: 1 )
by rubytears on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 10:55:15 AM AEST
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this poem is like my life youv'e no idea how it feels to no sum1 else feels that way......
luvs & kisses

Re: Counterfeit Grin (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:06:12 PM AEST
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excellent write, very well worded
I especially love the first and third stanzas

Re: Counterfeit Grin (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 02:01:33 AM AEST
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wow......very powerfull and very well worded i agree the third stanza stands out it is magnificant.

Sm

Re: Counterfeit Grin (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:28:04 PM AEST
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The ending was perfect. I loved that last stanza. Excellent work.

Re: Counterfeit Grin (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:49:47 AM AEST
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Very creative emotional poem. Shows strong feelings. Great write!

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