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Senseless
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:50:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Your words run together
and become undeniably
loud in my head.
It's been ages since I've
heard a word you've said.
Your voice pounding in my head.
I can't hear my thoughts
telling me to let go of what you did.
I turned my back,
as you fled,
telling stories of what we've done.
Exaggerating lies,
running on and on about
secrets that were never true.
How could you be so crude?
Hurt me like this.
Say the untrue things you said,
like I'm Madam of this dead city.
These words scarred me.
Sticks and stones only break bones,
and leave bruises,
and they eventually heal.
But words can scar the soul for life.
Now...
can you hear yourself
think with my voice pounding
in your head.
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
... [
2004-08-31 16:50:16]
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Re: Senseless
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by sid_the_tampon_fairy on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:59:54 PM AEST
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Dude, word to ur friggin mama! heehee! luv it. odd 1s rock! Oy wit dah poodles!
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Re: Senseless
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:16:26 PM AEST
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| wow you exspress this eerie vibe so well. i loved it. its somthing i think everyone can relate to. |
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Re: Senseless
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:40:28 PM AEST
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| very true about the words scarring a person for life bit. great write, very nice rhyme and flow. |
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