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Array ( [sid] => 62092 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the prelude 2 the rest of mi life [time] => 2004-08-31 18:46:29 [hometext] => I wrote this while i was drunk annoyed an just completely stressed over sum things,sum not even related 2 this at all [bodytext] => the everything 'n' nothing
the prelude 2 the rest of mi life
all the decisions tht hang on a knife.

the thoughts an fears on everything near.
the stresses an strains the pains of thought,
these decisions are startin 2 make me distrort.

the nothingness is making me want you more,
for you are the one i adore.
the decision is you,and i have no idea wot 2 do.

sumtimes ur so stupid, tearin urself apart.
you cnt take ur h8red out in ur art,
u have problems 'n' dnt want me involved,
i understand an leave you alone.

i love u an u love me but itz like we r watchin the tv
itz playing out without a doubt, an i realy want out.
theres sumthing sorre btween us u say,
wel yes there is an i adore u
but i dnt want u 2do it no more.

this is the prelude 2 the rest of my life,
all the decisions tht hang on a knife.
..!!!YOU!!!.. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Snapz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
the prelude 2 the rest of mi life

Contributed by Snapz on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:46:29 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



the everything 'n' nothing
the prelude 2 the rest of mi life
all the decisions tht hang on a knife.

the thoughts an fears on everything near.
the stresses an strains the pains of thought,
these decisions are startin 2 make me distrort.

the nothingness is making me want you more,
for you are the one i adore.
the decision is you,and i have no idea wot 2 do.

sumtimes ur so stupid, tearin urself apart.
you cnt take ur h8red out in ur art,
u have problems 'n' dnt want me involved,
i understand an leave you alone.

i love u an u love me but itz like we r watchin the tv
itz playing out without a doubt, an i realy want out.
theres sumthing sorre btween us u say,
wel yes there is an i adore u
but i dnt want u 2do it no more.

this is the prelude 2 the rest of my life,
all the decisions tht hang on a knife.
..!!!YOU!!!..




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Re: the prelude 2 the rest of mi life (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:54:16 PM AEST
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a slight unintelligible, but you can't help but love the angst of the thing! great write!
~Remy~


Re: the prelude 2 the rest of mi life (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 01:03:02 AM AEST
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well you know i can be very stupid sometimes. I know it tears you apart as much as it does me physically. This is a good write though you can tell you were obviously drunk. I'm sorry and ive told you i would stop for you because i love you. Well thank you for writing this i needed something to open my eyes.

I love you .......




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