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Deafeningly Silent
No one speaks
All is quiet

Loud inside
Solemn appearances
Screaming within
No one will take the chances

Everyone scared of emotions
Shaking violently again
No one cares of others
They only scream within
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Screaming Within

Contributed by mcloysoccer on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:08:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Event

Deafening Sounds
Deafeningly Silent
No one speaks
All is quiet

Loud inside
Solemn appearances
Screaming within
No one will take the chances

Everyone scared of emotions
Shaking violently again
No one cares of others
They only scream within

Copyright © mcloysoccer ... [ 2004-08-31 21:08:05]
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Re: Screaming Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:49:36 PM AEST
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"Deafeningly Silent" Hmmmm says the Teacher.....
P/S rythm----> rhythm....lmao...you'll be sorry I read your work....hehehe...
Another cool write.
Jenni

Re: Screaming Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 09:56:34 PM AEST
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Well done!! Quite deep, my friend.
I'm still thinking on it. Tres bon!

~Breezy

Re: Screaming Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:38:38 PM AEST
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amazing write. i love this one. keep up the fantastic work. your write is very true in many aspects, which is the sad part about this.

Re: Screaming Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 04:25:19 AM AEST
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AWESOME

Re: Screaming Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 04:33:36 PM AEST
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I never want to say anything negative on someones work, because I know that they wrote it because of their passion of writing. However I found something messing from this one. It really didn't catch my attention as other poems I have read. I'm not comparing no but there's something missing in yours. However the rhyming was very good.

Re: Screaming Within (User Rating: 1 )
by FireStarter on Saturday, 2nd January 2016 @ 03:16:53 PM AEST
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I absolutely love this poem :)

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