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Array ( [sid] => 6228 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Reminiscent of Stars [time] => 2002-11-05 06:40:00 [hometext] => Yay for me! I finally found that special someone after many dead ends. This is for you Dustin, I love you. ( From the stars over Harrison Bay and the stars over Montana, back to the stars over Cleveland, Tennesse...love was always there.) [bodytext] => Alone under the dark night sky
I gazed up at the millions of stars,
Wondering if you could see them
from where you were.

Somehow I knew you were thinking of me
and those few days before,
where you and I were we
It was crazy, that inevitable feeling
It had only been four sunrises and sunsets
since I had begun to count the days,
But it had been months from the day
I began to feel that way.

You became my dream come true
when you whispered "I love you"
My heart skipped beats with our first kiss
Each outing brought its own adventure and bliss
We could do absolutely nothing and be content.

Now I can't imagine life without you,
A dull colorless wasteland instead of skies bold and blue
You've brought color to my life,
Done away with my negativity and strife
You've helped me laugh, and even cry
I know I find more to love as time goes by.

I end these thoughts back where I began,
Gazing up at the stars, but this time
you're holding my hand. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 2 [informant] => ChicaBug [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Reminiscent of Stars

Contributed by ChicaBug on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Alone under the dark night sky
I gazed up at the millions of stars,
Wondering if you could see them
from where you were.

Somehow I knew you were thinking of me
and those few days before,
where you and I were we
It was crazy, that inevitable feeling
It had only been four sunrises and sunsets
since I had begun to count the days,
But it had been months from the day
I began to feel that way.

You became my dream come true
when you whispered "I love you"
My heart skipped beats with our first kiss
Each outing brought its own adventure and bliss
We could do absolutely nothing and be content.

Now I can't imagine life without you,
A dull colorless wasteland instead of skies bold and blue
You've brought color to my life,
Done away with my negativity and strife
You've helped me laugh, and even cry
I know I find more to love as time goes by.

I end these thoughts back where I began,
Gazing up at the stars, but this time
you're holding my hand.




Copyright © ChicaBug ... [ 2002-11-05 06:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Reminiscent of Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by stephy on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 06:53:48 AM AEST
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this is truly very beautiful and very well written. i really enjoyed reading this... maybe i'm just a sap, and maybe it's because i myself am in love... whatever the case, this is a really nice write. i'm happy you have found such a wonderful man. :)


Re: Reminiscent of Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 07:38:19 AM AEST
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Ohh... this was so beautiful!! I love it Ash! Your writing just keeps getting better and better. Dustin is truly wonderful to make you feel so happy! And I will let him in on our "inside plan" for the s.a. notes... hehe... Talk to you later chica... and find time for your old friend a-ight ;)

ginnie


Re: Reminiscent of Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 08:12:32 PM AEST
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This is so gorgeous! A truly touching and inspiring story with so much love in it!! What can I say, I'm a sucker for love, and the emotion comes across strongly in this. It's beautiful. :)

~ MoonlitAngel


Re: Reminiscent of Stars (User Rating: 1 )
by ChicaBug on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:07:20 AM AEST
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Thank-you so much for all your comments. This poem is one that means a lot to me, and I'm overjoyed to find that other people like it equally as much as I do. Thank-you again for all of your feed-back.




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