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Array ( [sid] => 62309 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => outspoken [time] => 2004-09-02 14:56:48 [hometext] => you told me to be more outspoken....so here i go loud and clear! [bodytext] => when we first met
my heart stopped
and the world paused so i could take in every inch of your face
what i forgot was because it slowed down,it regained the time quicker
so our meeting was very brief
you said hello and i could hardly breathe,i just managed to whisper hi
the next day my best friend
asked me to go out with you
i thought she was having a laugh
so i said no
but in the end
i just couldnt resist
and all of a sudden we were lovers...
we had our first kiss
these memories
make me feel queasy,love sick infact
i know its over
and we still talk on msn
even though im with someone else
i love you
i cant stop thinking about you
why?!
you said im nice
but i want you to express yourself
you told me it was over because i wasnt very outspoken
well here i go loud and clear
I LOVE YOU !!!! FOR ALL THE WORLD TO HEAR !!!!

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

outspoken

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:56:48 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

when we first met
my heart stopped
and the world paused so i could take in every inch of your face
what i forgot was because it slowed down,it regained the time quicker
so our meeting was very brief
you said hello and i could hardly breathe,i just managed to whisper hi
the next day my best friend
asked me to go out with you
i thought she was having a laugh
so i said no
but in the end
i just couldnt resist
and all of a sudden we were lovers...
we had our first kiss
these memories
make me feel queasy,love sick infact
i know its over
and we still talk on msn
even though im with someone else
i love you
i cant stop thinking about you
why?!
you said im nice
but i want you to express yourself
you told me it was over because i wasnt very outspoken
well here i go loud and clear
I LOVE YOU !!!! FOR ALL THE WORLD TO HEAR !!!!

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-09-02 14:56:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: outspoken (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:54:26 PM AEST
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Loud and clear Hannah, can't be anymore outspoken than that, I hope he can still hear!!!
I like your poem very much, it showed some really good emotions in your heart!
Love and hugs
consue

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