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Array ( [sid] => 62355 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Brother / Father [time] => 2004-09-02 20:44:53 [hometext] => i wrote this for my brother he's always been my father and i love him to death comments please [bodytext] => its weird you see
your more of a father
than my father is to me
you help me through hard time
listen to my troubles
talk to me when i need a friend
and walk me through the bitter end
although we may fight
and i say i hate you for a brother
i'd never in this world trade you for any other
i ask you to do alot for me
and of course you do
i hope you understand its all because i love you
i look up to you alot
you just dont understand
your a crowd pleaser and i'm your # 1 fan
i just thought i'd tell you how i feel
but i know your thinkin "what's the big deal?"
after all you've done this for 15 years
been there through all the pain and tears
i wanna pay you back for all that you've done for me
maybe this is not enough to make you see
how thankful i am but i dunno why you bother
bein in my life and bein a father [comments] => 4 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 55 [informant] => rebelshorty0418 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Brother Father

Contributed by rebelshorty0418 on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 08:44:53 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



its weird you see
your more of a father
than my father is to me
you help me through hard time
listen to my troubles
talk to me when i need a friend
and walk me through the bitter end
although we may fight
and i say i hate you for a brother
i'd never in this world trade you for any other
i ask you to do alot for me
and of course you do
i hope you understand its all because i love you
i look up to you alot
you just dont understand
your a crowd pleaser and i'm your # 1 fan
i just thought i'd tell you how i feel
but i know your thinkin "what's the big deal?"
after all you've done this for 15 years
been there through all the pain and tears
i wanna pay you back for all that you've done for me
maybe this is not enough to make you see
how thankful i am but i dunno why you bother
bein in my life and bein a father




Copyright © rebelshorty0418 ... [ 2004-09-02 20:44:53]
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Re: Brother Father (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:05:45 PM AEST
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AAWW This was so touching a sweet!
Christina


Re: Brother Father (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:19:28 AM AEST
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That was a good peom, i know your brother will like it. Im glad hes there for you.


Re: Brother Father (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:44:15 AM AEST
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my favourite big brother is 8 years older than me, and this is so how i feel about him! well done and thankyou!


Re: Brother Father (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:25:32 PM AEST
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I like this poem, and I hope your brother did too. And I'm sure he knows how much you love him. love ones always fight and the best part is when we make up. I wish I had someone in my life like this. Well written.




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