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Crying to myself way more than I should,
Alone in a city, alone in life,
Keep running, and falling, and taking the knife,
Home isn't where the heart is,
The heart never was,
Never going to look back again cos,
Mummy's alwaus crying, Daddy owns a gun,
You'd think spending time with daddy would be way more fun,
I'm quietly running away now,
To get away from here somehow,
But no matter how far,
What's left is a scar,
From the night I wasn't alone.
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The Nigh I Wasn't Alone

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Away from home, away for good,
Crying to myself way more than I should,
Alone in a city, alone in life,
Keep running, and falling, and taking the knife,
Home isn't where the heart is,
The heart never was,
Never going to look back again cos,
Mummy's alwaus crying, Daddy owns a gun,
You'd think spending time with daddy would be way more fun,
I'm quietly running away now,
To get away from here somehow,
But no matter how far,
What's left is a scar,
From the night I wasn't alone.

Copyright © corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-09-03 02:05:00]
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Re: The Nigh I Wasn't Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:11:57 AM AEST
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It seems like the pain never goes away, and its always a scar left. Good writing!!

Re: The Nigh I Wasn't Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:39:06 AM AEST
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a heart wrenching write loz. very powerful, you
continue to write more and more incredible poems

love always, dizza
xoxoxox

Re: The Nigh I Wasn't Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:42:16 AM AEST
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great write
glad you are back with ypdc!
your poems are swell!

cheers!

Re: The Nigh I Wasn't Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:36:38 PM AEST
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This poem is written excellently and I like the way you put so much emotion in it. Keep it up good job.

HAKIOKUSAKEN

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