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Array ( [sid] => 62416 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Ooooh that's ---- !!!!!!! [time] => 2004-09-03 12:24:46 [hometext] => Yeah I just wrote this for the hell of it one day on the bus and i though i would post it lol [bodytext] => This is myself and no other.
If anyone can hear my voice then they should know that I am a man of
Ambiguity....

The banana is never squeezed far from the tree,
and fate never knows,
it just might squeeze a bit of
juice and jogurt
into some small,
homeless,
impoverished child's life.

One never kknows as to the location of
The Great Purple Raspberry Of Love.

Somehow, it just doesn't show itself
any longer,
no.

Oh, now
I must go...

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 64 [informant] => SensitiveSoAbused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Ooooh that's ---- !!!!!!!

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:24:46 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

This is myself and no other.
If anyone can hear my voice then they should know that I am a man of
Ambiguity....

The banana is never squeezed far from the tree,
and fate never knows,
it just might squeeze a bit of
juice and jogurt
into some small,
homeless,
impoverished child's life.

One never kknows as to the location of
The Great Purple Raspberry Of Love.

Somehow, it just doesn't show itself
any longer,
no.

Oh, now
I must go...

Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2004-09-03 12:24:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Ooooh that's ---- !!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Gemini on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:37:08 PM AEST
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It's fruity, just kidding, this type of poem-makes me want to talk to the poet and see what he was thinking, in a good way. I am confused in a way, which is good. Thank you

Re: Ooooh that's ---- !!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by all4him on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:41:28 PM AEST
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Can you explain to me what your poems about? lol

Re: Ooooh that's ---- !!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 09:30:19 PM AEST
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I don't know the first thing that comes to mind is sexual abuse. Confusion of ones identity and sexual preference if you are a male who was abused.
Also it's almost a little scary because it sounds as if it was written by someone who abused or abuses children and letting the reader know you can never be too sure who a child molester can be or an adult who has sexally abused a child.
I may be off but that's what I got from this.
This was a well written poem, lets the reader really look deep into the writing.

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