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Array ( [sid] => 62431 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thank You Mom [time] => 2004-09-03 14:58:05 [hometext] => I've got nothing to say about this poem! it pretty much explains its self [bodytext] => I'm a girl who had no daddy.
He took me away then left me with no where to go.
My momma rescused me from them
And took me to where i belonged.
I lived my life with her in happiness
Up until the day he returned.
He fliped my world upside down.
He must of known he was doing so
Cause he said some hurtful things to me.
He told me I wasnt his daughter
Can you tell me why if i wasnt his daugther he came back to get me now?
Can you tell me why he came back to get me at all?
He never cared before why he caring now?
I never thought i'd say
Im glad im not a daddys girl!
For if i was a daddy's girl
I'd be sittin on the streets.
He would of left me there to rot
and never took another thought.
So i remind me self
To thank my mom
For not letting me be
daddy's lil girl!!!! [comments] => 1 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 23 [informant] => all4him [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

Thank You Mom

Contributed by all4him on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 02:58:05 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

I'm a girl who had no daddy.
He took me away then left me with no where to go.
My momma rescused me from them
And took me to where i belonged.
I lived my life with her in happiness
Up until the day he returned.
He fliped my world upside down.
He must of known he was doing so
Cause he said some hurtful things to me.
He told me I wasnt his daughter
Can you tell me why if i wasnt his daugther he came back to get me now?
Can you tell me why he came back to get me at all?
He never cared before why he caring now?
I never thought i'd say
Im glad im not a daddys girl!
For if i was a daddy's girl
I'd be sittin on the streets.
He would of left me there to rot
and never took another thought.
So i remind me self
To thank my mom
For not letting me be
daddy's lil girl!!!!

Copyright © all4him ... [ 2004-09-03 14:58:05]
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Re: Thank You Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:35:05 PM AEST
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So sorry, had a dad who did thta for a long time, and then wised up! things happen with ppl that we cant explain......deep write and well put feelings.!

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