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Array ( [sid] => 62446 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nightmares [time] => 2004-09-03 16:56:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I used to be scared of the dark now I’m frightened of it
An ocean of the invisible, a shark of death
A vision breaking, a moment fused
I can’t be alone much more
I need a candles’ glamour
I’ll drink the time away, I’ll cultivate grandeur
And shed love; strip the regret with every sip

I miss your shallow touch, your deep lips
Your petite hands gliding through my finger tips
Your vigorous thighs and you’re fighting fists
Pushing me away, away, away when I touch your hips
This feeling of empty; is better than being an enemy
Still, this darkness makes me blind to the core
I can’t remember what you know and what I hide
I can’t feel your pulse as I reach for the door
I can’t tell you what’s in front and what’s behind
Still spindling, I begin to fall...

Because I miss the sniffle in the rain
The thunder among the shores
And telling you- ‘it’s alright’ to a rapturous applause
In my shadowy skull we’re Hollywood
Played to a script,
The lead star is just misunderstood
Delivering his lines
That keep you confined
That keeps this picket fence around us
That keeps us embracing despair
Because I miss the sniffle in the rain
And living as a pair…

What’s real and what’s a nightmare?
My reminiscences decayed
These nightmares will soon fade
Then you’ll stay…
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Overstated [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Nightmares

Contributed by Overstated on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 04:56:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I used to be scared of the dark now I’m frightened of it
An ocean of the invisible, a shark of death
A vision breaking, a moment fused
I can’t be alone much more
I need a candles’ glamour
I’ll drink the time away, I’ll cultivate grandeur
And shed love; strip the regret with every sip

I miss your shallow touch, your deep lips
Your petite hands gliding through my finger tips
Your vigorous thighs and you’re fighting fists
Pushing me away, away, away when I touch your hips
This feeling of empty; is better than being an enemy
Still, this darkness makes me blind to the core
I can’t remember what you know and what I hide
I can’t feel your pulse as I reach for the door
I can’t tell you what’s in front and what’s behind
Still spindling, I begin to fall...

Because I miss the sniffle in the rain
The thunder among the shores
And telling you- ‘it’s alright’ to a rapturous applause
In my shadowy skull we’re Hollywood
Played to a script,
The lead star is just misunderstood
Delivering his lines
That keep you confined
That keeps this picket fence around us
That keeps us embracing despair
Because I miss the sniffle in the rain
And living as a pair…

What’s real and what’s a nightmare?
My reminiscences decayed
These nightmares will soon fade
Then you’ll stay…




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Re: Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:30:51 PM AEST
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What an expierence.,,,I used to make my self scared, so now in my 20's I am not! The things we perceive and think.......Great write!


Re: Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 11:47:43 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written....
Can feel the emotions within....
Jenni


Re: Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:01:32 AM AEST
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it's a incrediably powerful, and emotionally painful write. i under stand you in here, i know those dark and painful secrets that you can only tell through writing. i just i cuold write as good as you though...


Re: Nightmares (User Rating: 1 )
by Renstar on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:46:40 PM AEST
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beautifully emotional,excellent:)




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