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Wish For Death
Contributed by
requiemforadream
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Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:20:43 PM in AEST
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Life is pointless
Life is cold
Life is nothing
Life is pathetic
Created to die
Mindless, soulless creatures
Wandering endlessly
Most with out a clue
We hurt we feel pain
Who needs anything more?
Mistakes and treasons
Pain caused and pain suffered
In the end why does it matter?
All we do is hurt each other
Wish for hate
Wish for fear
Wish for pain
Wish for death
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Re: Wish For Death
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by diamond_tears on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:26:03 PM AEST
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| i like it. very to the point. what i think! |
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Re: Wish For Death
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by arden on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 07:49:44 PM AEST
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Life is pointless when there is no reason left to live it
Life makes us cold
Life means nothing when you have nothing
We all are pathetic
Death is inevitable.
Good poem. It speaks loud emotions and feelings. Or I am probably mistaken, could be wrote on a whim, just written when the urge came to you.
Either way, words written that I have felt and thought.
Powerful write. Greatly penned.
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Re: Wish For Death
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:42:37 PM AEST
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Too true. And in the end, it doesn't matter. Nothing matters. Good poem.
'Wish for hate
wish for fear
wish for pain
wish for death'
It doesn't seem as if we need to do any wishing in this department, we seem to create it and fall victim to it without even trrying. Great write. |
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