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Array ( [sid] => 6249 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => selfish [time] => 2002-11-05 16:00:00 [hometext] => this sounds lyricy...but i am not song writer, so i am keeping it a poem. about my boyfriend, again. :-) [bodytext] => can i steal you?
can i take you away from the world
and hide you?
so that i can be with you whenever i want
and let no one else ever see you ever again
no, that would be selfish

will you come over?
so i can hold you forever
yes, i'll just refuse to let you go
'cause everytime i let you go i get colder
can i at least wear your jacket while your away?
because it smells like you,
so maybe i can pretend that your here
and make myself feel a little bit better? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Haligh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
selfish

Contributed by Haligh on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



can i steal you?
can i take you away from the world
and hide you?
so that i can be with you whenever i want
and let no one else ever see you ever again
no, that would be selfish

will you come over?
so i can hold you forever
yes, i'll just refuse to let you go
'cause everytime i let you go i get colder
can i at least wear your jacket while your away?
because it smells like you,
so maybe i can pretend that your here
and make myself feel a little bit better?




Copyright © Haligh ... [ 2002-11-05 16:00:00]
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Re: selfish (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 08:00:54 PM AEST
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I have to say, the very first line of this poem brought a smile to my face, because I know exactly how you feel! And yeah, maybe it's a little selfish, but... what's so horrible about being selfish, really? lol

"every time I let you go I get colder" - love that line! :D Awesome poem, I personally love it!

~ MoonlitAngel




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