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Array ( [sid] => 62541 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You [time] => 2004-09-04 17:05:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You caused him drama and didn't know how to treat him right
I'm the one he talked to late at night.
You laughed at his goals and his determination
I'm the one who encouraged him to go after his aspirations
You played games with his heart and told him lies
I'm the one who got to comfort him and look into his eyes
You never got to look into his heart and soul like I did
you were too busy trying to see what you could get
You messed up with a good man and all you can say is "damn"
you also realized you'll never be half the woman I am
Soon he'll be the man he always wanted to be
and you'll be kicking yourself wishing you were me
So, when you're at home thinking about him touching me, sexin' me, taking care of
me and adoring me
don't playahate, congratulate
on how I demonstrated the skillz and the will
I listened to his needs and accommodated and showed your man he was
appreciated!!

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You

Contributed by HisAngel4Life on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:05:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You caused him drama and didn't know how to treat him right
I'm the one he talked to late at night.
You laughed at his goals and his determination
I'm the one who encouraged him to go after his aspirations
You played games with his heart and told him lies
I'm the one who got to comfort him and look into his eyes
You never got to look into his heart and soul like I did
you were too busy trying to see what you could get
You messed up with a good man and all you can say is "damn"
you also realized you'll never be half the woman I am
Soon he'll be the man he always wanted to be
and you'll be kicking yourself wishing you were me
So, when you're at home thinking about him touching me, sexin' me, taking care of
me and adoring me
don't playahate, congratulate
on how I demonstrated the skillz and the will
I listened to his needs and accommodated and showed your man he was
appreciated!!

Copyright © HisAngel4Life ... [ 2004-09-04 17:05:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 10:06:39 PM AEST
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Whoa! Full of fire and spit! I like this- you go girl! I can see you on stage doing this one- get to it. Nice job!

Laurie

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