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[aid] => Mick
[title] => °°°Voices Of Heaven°°°
[time] => 2002-11-05 20:30:00
[hometext] => Ok Aernby here's your "Challenge" poem that you asked for. Your challenge was to see If anyone could write a poem taking the other side or in the third person. I tried to do the third person here in this poem, not sure how well i did trying to be my grandpa as the writer who would clearly be speaking to me and telling me what my family was saying to me as well from up above, but if this isn't what you were challenging in a poem let me know!
[bodytext] => I lived my life to teach you
All about true love my grand child I hope you learned somthing from me I hope my time on earth was worth while Your grandma says she loves you And she's watching you every day She says don't give up hope in love You'll find it soon one day I wanted to say i was sorry For causing you so much pain By leaving you at the time i did But you had so much more to gain I raised your mom and my 5 other kids They were the joy of my whole life I worked on the railroad to feed them all And i never stopped loving my wife Your children that passed say they love you They watch how you are as a mom They say they are waiting up for you And for you they will sing heaven's song Now you my grandchild must carry on Let go of the pain you have for us We had to go, we were set free Don't give up faith, hope, and trust I see how you keep us alive in your heart when you sing your songs for our love But baby it's time to live your own life Stop living it for all of us here above [comments] => 6 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 25 [informant] => OreO [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
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