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Array ( [sid] => 62732 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unforgiven [time] => 2004-09-06 03:07:53 [hometext] => wrote this about a wonderful girl who was abused brutally until she killed herself. her parents hated her and beat her more when she came out to them as lesbain. goes to show how messed up some people can be. written horrible, but for a wonderful person. [bodytext] => I'm unforgiven
Why do you hurt me the way you do?
Torn down when I see the black and blue
How can you hate me when all I ever did was care for you?
I tried my best to be everything you wanted me to be
So why do you hate me?
It's only choice and consequence as you would say
I wont lie or try to be another way
It's who I am so dont tell me that I'm wrong
It's who I've been all along
She was unforgiven
She couldn't help the way she felt
Her motive driven although she felt the never ending guilt
His daughter's a sinner
He's filled with endless disgust
She couldn't deny it when he caught her fullfilling her lust
Her body black and blue
What the **** is wrong with you?
Beautiful inside
My love for her was never denied
Why do you hurt her?
How selfish can you be?
You will not learn until she leaves you tragically
She was unforgiven
They didnt see her beauty inside
Unforgiven
They wouldn't of cared if she had died
Unforgiven
And now that she is gone
Unforgiven
They know that they were wrong [comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 6 [informant] => CrimsonOrgazm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Unforgiven

Contributed by CrimsonOrgazm on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:07:53 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'm unforgiven
Why do you hurt me the way you do?
Torn down when I see the black and blue
How can you hate me when all I ever did was care for you?
I tried my best to be everything you wanted me to be
So why do you hate me?
It's only choice and consequence as you would say
I wont lie or try to be another way
It's who I am so dont tell me that I'm wrong
It's who I've been all along
She was unforgiven
She couldn't help the way she felt
Her motive driven although she felt the never ending guilt
His daughter's a sinner
He's filled with endless disgust
She couldn't deny it when he caught her fullfilling her lust
Her body black and blue
What the **** is wrong with you?
Beautiful inside
My love for her was never denied
Why do you hurt her?
How selfish can you be?
You will not learn until she leaves you tragically
She was unforgiven
They didnt see her beauty inside
Unforgiven
They wouldn't of cared if she had died
Unforgiven
And now that she is gone
Unforgiven
They know that they were wrong

Copyright © CrimsonOrgazm ... [ 2004-09-06 03:07:53]
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Re: Unforgiven (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:09:24 AM AEST
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Very sad and a crying shame 'cause as they judged her they were passing judgement on themselves.
Greatly written.
luv, huggs, mercy,
emy

Re: Unforgiven (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:00:45 AM AEST
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Sad and harsh, The evil side people that only see uglyness, rather than the beauty within, thats dam cold hearted, what they did to her.
Awesomely written it opened my eyes.

Take care always

Kindragon

Re: Unforgiven (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:00:57 AM AEST
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THis was really good, and so relevant to this ***** up world we live in, where people are judged for what they are rather than who they are.

Re: Unforgiven (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_girl121 on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:26:13 PM AEST
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wow this is really sad , parents shouldn't take their problems out on their kid. im sorry that this how her life was but now she is away from her abusing parents. angie

it was still written good , its just a really sad topic thats all....

Re: Unforgiven (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:13:51 PM AEST
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I think its wonderfully written, thats very nice of u to have made this for her, im sure she would be proud, its a very sad yet touching write, excellent work hunni!

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