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Array ( [sid] => 62775 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => K.--Moore [time] => 2004-09-06 15:05:13 [hometext] => Its quite....morbid/dramatic...(well I think so)... [bodytext] => She fell
as a blazing
ember from the heavens-
Thrust out bare for all to see
disgracing all humanity-
Her brilliance hid itself in her beauty-
She made careful that no one would ever see
the morbid truth
the demented roots
which racked her mind for eternity-
Forever held captive
by her souls whim
to wonder the earth and the seven seas-
searching for a cloak of ease
the protection that was once sought for greed
became her every need-
followed by her silhouette of sadness
her spirit became the shadows
her mind ran rabid and
cursed the living
while blaming the dead-
her epitaph was never found
her existence could not be proved-
she was one
she was all
she was to die-
born from mere apparitions
of what
once were
yet never could be-
her eyes scarred
and covered with shame-
her guilt consumed her once more
she tried to fight but forever lost-
The battle was not her choice
her enemy was her only ally
she never ceased to fight
this stranger that corrupts her mind
fore she shall never witness her foe
because this adversary is hidden
deep within her soul-
she ignores all reality and refuses to believe
that she is her only enemy-
tainted by her thoughts
awakened by her screams
she will never be forgotten
nor her sweet insanity.
Fore she shall never die
because her enemy will- without end- be.
She is her only enemy
plunged out of hell for all to see-
the weakness, the modesty of her hair which blankets her curse-
the blight of a perpetual enemy
that only she
will ever see…
death shall save her-
shallow serenity-

As her blood escapes her body
And stains the earth
And the air we breathe
Her enemy is determined to leap into the mind
Of everything
Nothing more to save her soul
Fore her sorrow will take its toll
Her enemy will follow thee-
Her enemy shall always be-
Fore in her mind it rests in peace
Her sullen and fallen-
acidic enemy.
©Timothy Parris
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K.--Moore

Contributed by Versifier on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:05:13 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She fell
as a blazing
ember from the heavens-
Thrust out bare for all to see
disgracing all humanity-
Her brilliance hid itself in her beauty-
She made careful that no one would ever see
the morbid truth
the demented roots
which racked her mind for eternity-
Forever held captive
by her souls whim
to wonder the earth and the seven seas-
searching for a cloak of ease
the protection that was once sought for greed
became her every need-
followed by her silhouette of sadness
her spirit became the shadows
her mind ran rabid and
cursed the living
while blaming the dead-
her epitaph was never found
her existence could not be proved-
she was one
she was all
she was to die-
born from mere apparitions
of what
once were
yet never could be-
her eyes scarred
and covered with shame-
her guilt consumed her once more
she tried to fight but forever lost-
The battle was not her choice
her enemy was her only ally
she never ceased to fight
this stranger that corrupts her mind
fore she shall never witness her foe
because this adversary is hidden
deep within her soul-
she ignores all reality and refuses to believe
that she is her only enemy-
tainted by her thoughts
awakened by her screams
she will never be forgotten
nor her sweet insanity.
Fore she shall never die
because her enemy will- without end- be.
She is her only enemy
plunged out of hell for all to see-
the weakness, the modesty of her hair which blankets her curse-
the blight of a perpetual enemy
that only she
will ever see…
death shall save her-
shallow serenity-

As her blood escapes her body
And stains the earth
And the air we breathe
Her enemy is determined to leap into the mind
Of everything
Nothing more to save her soul
Fore her sorrow will take its toll
Her enemy will follow thee-
Her enemy shall always be-
Fore in her mind it rests in peace
Her sullen and fallen-
acidic enemy.
©Timothy Parris

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Re: K.--Moore (User Rating: 1 )
by DragonLuvSong on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 07:04:30 PM AEST
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it did seem a little morbid/dramatic like you said, but that is really the kind of stuff that I like to read. I wasn't really sure of the pace since you didn't put any punctuation, but I kind of got it as the dashes were new sentences...was that right? I really like it though, props to you Timothy Parris.

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