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Array ( [sid] => 6287 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Modern Day Frankinstein [time] => 2002-11-06 07:30:00 [hometext] => I can't believe what I've become, this is an account of what recently happened to me... [bodytext] => I used to be so placid.
Watched sunsets with my love,
And all in all tried
To please what was above.

But that night tore
Straight through my placid soul,
And watching that fool beat you
I somehow lost control.

I chased him down that alley,
Where he thought that he could hide,
Thinking being a helpless girl
I'd have cowered and just cried.

Pacing down towards him,
I fely my rage and fury seething
And I lashed out beating him till
He had almost stopped breathing.

He tried to fight back
But all his punches couldn't make me scream,
For might is useless against a girl
Who becomes a ruthless killing machine.

And all the while I was aching
So badly with a hatred pain,
I would have really killed him
If the police hadn't called my name.

Now I feel a different person,
Something snapped hard that night,
Like Frankenstein I feel so desperate to love,
But equally eager to kill and to fight. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 250 [topic] => 13 [informant] => phildel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Modern Day Frankinstein

Contributed by phildel on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I used to be so placid.
Watched sunsets with my love,
And all in all tried
To please what was above.

But that night tore
Straight through my placid soul,
And watching that fool beat you
I somehow lost control.

I chased him down that alley,
Where he thought that he could hide,
Thinking being a helpless girl
I'd have cowered and just cried.

Pacing down towards him,
I fely my rage and fury seething
And I lashed out beating him till
He had almost stopped breathing.

He tried to fight back
But all his punches couldn't make me scream,
For might is useless against a girl
Who becomes a ruthless killing machine.

And all the while I was aching
So badly with a hatred pain,
I would have really killed him
If the police hadn't called my name.

Now I feel a different person,
Something snapped hard that night,
Like Frankenstein I feel so desperate to love,
But equally eager to kill and to fight.

Copyright Â© phildel ... [ 2002-11-06 07:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Modern Day Frankinstein (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 07:34:18 AM AEST
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This is so sad
and full of so much
emotion, i enjoyed
reading this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Modern Day Frankinstein (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 07:43:53 AM AEST
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Wow! great poem. Love the last two lines especially.

Re: Modern Day Frankinstein (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 09:30:01 AM AEST
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Awesome write.....enjoyed it.. YOU GO, GRRL!!!!
Jenni

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