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Hostage to Hate
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:54:38 PM in AEST
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Crawling, in this stinking valley of depression
Loneliness my only companion
Haunted by dreams I cannot describe
Unleashing my hate against myself
Bleeding pain from my babbling lips
My arms have been ripped from their sockets
Unceremoniously burned before me
My hate-filled eyes disgust me
As I shamble in my self made pit
My hate simmers deep within
Killing me with each breath
As it punctures my heart
Ripping it wider every second
Screaming a growl from my tortured vocal chords
As blood literally pours from my eyes
Ripping shreds from my shirts
To wrap over the festering wounds
Bleeding from my (once filled with life) eyes
Stumbling around blindly
Meekly mewling weakened sobs
Daily life impossible in my predicament
A hostage to my own hate
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bobotheclown
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Re: Hostage to Hate
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by darkplaidbabe on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 10:58:35 PM AEST
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very nicely done, you write with such unbridled emotion. beautiful write. PM me anytime if you need to talk.
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Re: Hostage to Hate
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:18:35 PM AEST
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| OMG this is awesome, u hav such talent! this is a brilliant write, but i luv all of ur stuff! its so blunt, but incredible! |
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Re: Hostage to Hate
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:23:27 PM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy,
emy |
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Re: Hostage to Hate
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:02:24 AM AEST
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one of many things I enjoy about your writing your so blunt and open with every emotion your feeling no sugar coated kisses with these another deep and powerful write once again
Michelle |
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Re: Hostage to Hate
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:13:40 AM AEST
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This has to be one of my favorite poems by you, Joel.
Jaime |
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Re: Hostage to Hate
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by Destiny on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:02:12 PM AEST
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| Very powerful write |
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Re: Hostage to Hate
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by waos on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:17:14 PM AEST
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Hate really does drag you down.. good write about showing what happens when you hate.. I thought the imagery was awesome in all of it, I could picture it in my head.. and there was even some good old alliteration (meekly mewling)
awesome job Joel.. i hope you can come to terms with your hate if this poem concerns you |
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Re: Hostage to Hate
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by Soulless on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 12:06:26 AM AEST
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Wow, a very aggressive and straight forward poem.
You never cease to amaze me.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Hostage to Hate
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by cryingonmyporch on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 11:57:43 PM AEST
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| Too Awesome. I hadn't read one of your poems in a while. But then all your poems are awesome.~Amy |
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Re: Hostage to Hate
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by theMoth on
Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 03:53:26 PM AEST
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Your use of gory
mutilation is very
effective in address
to what you are
conveying
emotionally.
It's very visceral.
--Mothy |
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