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Array ( [sid] => 63206 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Intoxication [time] => 2004-09-09 23:23:45 [hometext] => Love..use and be used [bodytext] => I could engrave your words inside my soul
whisper the words that keep you whole
I would come to love you within time
eventually call you mine
numb your pain like alcohol
but you would drink me like cheap wine

You would knock me down
and leave me sore
i would be worthless
if i was yours
but the pimp is nothing
without his whores

so consume what saves you
until its gone
but the king is nothing
without his pawns
and you would be nothing
without me
because hes also nothing
without his queen

I could whisper the words that make you whole
and to the devil extend my soul
use and be used
until i fall apart
ill never sell my soul
or surrender my heart.

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Intoxication

Contributed by Chanti on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:23:45 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I could engrave your words inside my soul
whisper the words that keep you whole
I would come to love you within time
eventually call you mine
numb your pain like alcohol
but you would drink me like cheap wine

You would knock me down
and leave me sore
i would be worthless
if i was yours
but the pimp is nothing
without his whores

so consume what saves you
until its gone
but the king is nothing
without his pawns
and you would be nothing
without me
because hes also nothing
without his queen

I could whisper the words that make you whole
and to the devil extend my soul
use and be used
until i fall apart
ill never sell my soul
or surrender my heart.

Copyright © Chanti ... [ 2004-09-09 23:23:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Intoxication (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:32:10 AM AEST
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Cool, good write

Re: Intoxication (User Rating: 1 )
by ammalu on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:18:05 AM AEST
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good expression. yes, LOVE pains - sweet pain - but not to be heart breaking - be bold - keep writing.

Re: Intoxication (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:24:51 AM AEST
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awesome

Re: Intoxication (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:29:31 PM AEST
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Yes love is often like this. I loved this with all
the analogies and such. This was just
wonderfully written. I loved the last two lines
they were very inspiring. It was good to read
something by you finally.

Bobo (Joel)

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